Fic: Cousins: A Sleep Over ** Aredhel,Galadriel ** 1/1 Rated G

[phyncke]

Series: Cousins

Comments

[fairjennet]

*loves*

[phyncke]

*mush* Thank you. I tried to be true to both charries there and I think it worked.

*hugs* Thank you for looking at it pre-posting. You really did help in the formation of this story.

[fairjennet]

*squish* No probs. The voices in my head are always available to help.:P
This is a really good story! *hugs* You did great.

[phyncke]

Thank you, darlink. That makes me feel great. *hugs*

[minuial_nuwing]

Oooo, that was good! A top layer of sweet and funny, but underneath there were dark things and ominous noises. I loved it!

**hugs**

[phyncke]

That is just the idea here. That there is a bit of foreshadowing and foreboding in this but the fun bit of the elflings. I tried to balance it.

Thank you you reading! *hugs*

[chaotic_binky]

Such an unusual story, I really enjoyed it. Hugs Binky x x x

[phyncke]

Thank you! I have a series planned. Stay tuned for more. I had fun with this one. *hugs*

[keiliss]

Very nicely done, dear. It's a fresh, original idea. I'm looking forward to the next in the series.

Something I'm curious about, so I may as well ask. When you showed me this originally, the draft stopped at approximately this point *
The room felt heavy with the silence between them and the only sounds were the sizzle of the tiny flame and the breathing of the two elflings.*

I'm wondering if you somehow omitted the final page or if you've expanded the story since, because at the time I was very confused at the ending (as you know) It's come together really well now.

*hugs*

[phyncke]

Thank you for the great feedback, Kei. It was a really fast write but it did come together nicely. *hugs* Your input helped a lot along the way.

As for that draft...when I sent it to you, I made a mistake and sent you one of my incomplete drafts when I meant to send you the finished draft. So you got the unfinished one. I had two files going and sent you the wrong one. *blush* I did that with Tuxie too. *beet red* This is what happens when you have too many versions of something on your computer! *stammer*

Sorry for the confusion that caused. I had meant for you to look at the whole thing and now you have! *pets*

[keiliss]

Ah, that explains why we seemed to be talking at cross-purposes. Sorry if I sounded discouraging, but what I read seemed to have no point... LOL.

*hugs you*

[phyncke]

Not so very... I hope it has one now. :) *huggles*

[anonymous]

I loved this story! You did a wonderful job of evoking the eery atmosphere as Galadriel delivered her prophecy. I also loved Aredhel quick little observation about how bossy her little cousin was.

Egads -- can you imagine having Galadriel as a cousin?

[phyncke]

She would be difficult no doubt! Thank you for reading the story and giving me such wonderful feed back. It really means a lot to me!