And We Danced * Fingon/Aegnor * For Claudielf (PG)

[phyncke]

I had a lot of fun writing for Slashy Santa. This was my first time. A big thank you to keiliss for her wondrous beta of this work. You rock!

Title: And We Danced
Author: phyncke
Beta: KeilissEmail: jhfink@sbcglobal.net

Comments

[zafiro_v]

Such a bittersweet ending... Nice work, hon! =)

[phyncke]

Thank you. That was what I was striving for. Thank you for reading! *huggles*

[zafiro_v]

*huggles back*

[jaiden_s]

That was very sweet. :)

[phyncke]

Aww thank you. I thought so too. :)

[rhapsody11]

*lets out a deep sigh*

Phyncke, you ... wow, this was a beautiful story! It has everything: a gentle pacing, an atmosphere which is so beautifully captured in both narrative and dialogue.

His voice was warm and wrapped around me like a soft fur.

I really loved the way how you described his voice here... wow!

And this is such a breathtaking scene:

The maids twirled in time to the drum and lute, skirts billowing behind in their wake. They were dressed in bright colors so it was a spectacle to see, a feast for the eyes. Most of the males wore forest green to match the season but the females wore any color imaginable to cheer up the gathering, with ribbons in their hair that trailed through the air as they turned and swayed.

*thumbs up* this is a magnificent short story!

[phyncke]

I am so glad you like it. Your feedback is always useful and thoughtful! This story really flowed when I worked on it. They really worked together.

The dancing scene was something I really could see in my mind so it was a visual thing to me.

Thank you for reading it and commenting!

[ford_of_bruinen]

Oh this is lovely!! Well worth the wait :)

[phyncke]

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed it.