Suits Fic: Some Nights (It Was Meant To Be)

Oct 03, 2012 00:06

I was stuck, but then leave it to these two to make fic happen anyway. I don't know. It's a moment in time? The first in a multi-fic? They just wanted to be in formal wear, okay?

Title: Some Nights (It Was Meant To Be)
Rating: PG
Category: Donna Paulsen/Harvey Specter.
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Owned by others.
Author's Note: Thanks to magisterequitum and bichito who ( Read more... )

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lizook12 October 4 2012, 22:08:14 UTC
OMG I love this. And them in formal wear. And pins holding her hair up.

And this: She introduces herself as Harvey Specter's plus one because she is incorrigible. It earns them looks, equal to the stares she draws in that dress alone, and there's really not a single thing he'd change with their entrance. Because between the way he enjoys her using that introduction and not wanting to change anything about it... it so encompasses them in an oddly beautiful way.

Also, adored that subtle bit of him having to clear his throat before he leaves.

so amazing <3

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phrenitis October 5 2012, 18:56:38 UTC
Hee! *big grin* Thank you!

I love how Harvey can get slightly awkward when reality and feelings start to make sense to him. Heh. ;)

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lovexwentxred October 5 2012, 06:50:49 UTC
Oh. This was absolutely perfect. I loveee the idea of Harvey and Donna going to a black tie event, and Donna sending him reeling with her dress and her heels added to her amazing self just being her, basically outshining everybody in the room.

This line is marvelous, btw:
She sips at her champagne thoughtfully, and he likes the brazen way she looks at him, deciphering and understanding off a glance because their years together speak louder than anything they could say. She is, he realizes suddenly, his longest relationship.

It captures their relationship so. well. You really have their voices down. This one's going into memories. I just have one last thing to say: MULTI-FIC PRETTY PLEASE. ;)

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phrenitis October 5 2012, 18:59:10 UTC
Your comments are incredibly sweet, thank you!! :)

And if what more I have jotted down so far is any indication, I can say multi-fic is looking like a definite possibility. The two of them in formal wear is apparently something I keep wanting to explore? Lol.

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abvj October 8 2012, 02:44:26 UTC
This is exceptional. I really love the quietness of this, the way you capture this very realistic moment in time. Naturally, their voices are spot-on, and you can just taste the tension between them, and the frustration with respecting boundaries that have more or less become obsolete.

Never stop writing these two, please!

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phrenitis October 9 2012, 10:00:14 UTC
*hugs you to pieces*

Thank you!! And I know I say this every time, but I'm so glad we have this awesome little community and each other to keep ideas and fic going during the hiatus. I just want to talk about them ALL THE TIME.

Also! Saw you posted a new fic (the flail I have over that fact is absurd), and I already have it opened in my browser so I can read and enjoy it tomorrow! ILU SO MUCH.

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xyliette October 9 2012, 04:32:21 UTC
They did just want to be in formal wear, and I am not complaining!

"Being Harvey Specter's plus one?" she asks, then cocks her head to the side as she thinks back on the night. "I could do worse." LOL! Please let the second "half" of this season show us some fun like this. Thank you!

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phrenitis October 9 2012, 10:04:13 UTC
They are RIDICULOUS in formal wear. To the point I can't stop thinking about it. These two are ruining my ability to concentrate on, you know, life. SIGH.

Thank you for the comments! And omg yes - a formal wear scene with the two of them is so at the top of my second half season wish list!!

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tidbit2008 October 28 2012, 04:28:49 UTC
I continue to be completely enraptured with the way you write them. And I love the lines you blur and pick at in this ♥

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phrenitis December 25 2012, 02:02:08 UTC
OOPS. Sorry I'm responding so late! But thank you so much. <3

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