Fic: "Lit Up" 4/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike, NC-17

[phreakycat]

Title: Lit Up

Chapter: Four

Genre: H/C, slash

Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count.

Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety.

Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally get

Comments

[mrsreynolds13]

first of all, i sincerely hope you're feeling better <3

second of all, i don't think you could be anything other than an amazing writer. no matter what :)

third of all, thank you so much for this beautiful fic and this perfect resolution. i adored the way harvey told mike he loved him; it's so perfectly harvey. totally and utterly.
your use of colour and senses just blew me away yet again and the end was wonderful, sweetie. awww i'm hugging myself right now.
i'm looking forward to the Harvey POV tag, and everything else you choose to write in this fandom. <3

[phreakycat]

Aww, thank you lovely! That's so kind, and I'm so glad you liked it. :)

I am feeling a bit better, but until I get these screws and plates out of my bones it's going to be serious discomfort! At least I have fandom to distract me, right? :) *hugs you*

[jiluvsinging]

This is just heartbreakingly perfect. I've been tracking this since you started and it's just a perfect fic. <3 I honestly have nothing but the best things to say about how this makes me feel. You've worded it so perfectly that I can see the colors they way mike would. Perfection.

[phreakycat]

Wow, thank you! That's really amazing to hear - I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for the kind feedback. :)

[phreakycat]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[shi_koi]

--drive by random icon love--

Guh...

[kimmilein]

YAY!!! You updated!!!!! Woo-hoo!!!

But AWWW, it's over. Sniff.

You continue to rock this story despite your not feeling well (get well soon, by the way!). I am very sad to see it end, but oh looky! You are writing a tag! I'm very happy again!

You just make me a roller-coaster of emotions, darn you. I'm all over the place. :-)

[phreakycat]

But roller coasters are fun, right? :)

Glad you liked it! :)

[meeks00]

<3 Sounds like you've had a hard time of it lately, and I hope you're feeling better!

On another note, holy shit. I don't think you could possibly write anything dull or less than well-written and beautiful, even when not right as rain and all.

This is just the most amazing story - wonderfully crafted from beginning to end and tying together in such a clear and well-executed way. Your style is fantastic, and I think it's just amazing how each sentence flows so well and so uniquely, with such beauty and finesse.

Sometimes at night, Harvey’s voice is little more than a whisp of smoke bracketed by their lips pressed together in wet kisses, just enough hue to bridge the distance.

These are the moments that Mike likes best - when everything disappears but their two voices twined together, the whole night stretching out before them like a blank canvas, just waiting to be filled with color. This killed me. I hate to pull out first sentences or story closers because they're typically a favorite across the board, but, honestly?

[phreakycat]

Oh, wow! Thanks for such a detailed, kind comment! I'm just all a-flutter with happy-tingly-ness. XD

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that the descriptions were effective, and I'm really glad that you took the time to let me know what you liked specifically, especially since I was nervous about the closing line (I rewrote it about 100 times, no kidding).

LOL I don't have any plans to stop writing anytime soon, no worries. :)

Thank you again! It was so kind!