H50 Fic: "The Mountains Washed Away" 1/?, H/C, Danno/Steve

[phreakycat]

Title: The Mountains Washed Away
Author: Phreakycat
Pairing: Danno/Steve
Rating: M
Genre: Adventure, H/C, Slash
Warnings: Some violence, mention of physical injury, boy love (though I think of this as an enticement rather than a warning...)
Summary: Take Steven and Danno and blend well with gunfire and an explosion.  Add a healthy dose of whump and

Comments

[methosjo]

I love it...Danny to the rescue

“Why the hell did I get stuck with the only SEAL on earth with a penchant for drowning? I’m going to tell the other SEALs, McGarrett. I swear. And they’ll laugh at you and revoke your nautical merit badge or something."

Can't wait to read more of Danny's snipping at him while he recovers, maybe Danny will have to nurse him back to health.

[phreakycat]

Who else is going to nurse him back to health? LOL I can't imagine Danny letting anyone else do it. He'd be all "You're giving him pineapple juice? What the hell is wrong with you people? Everyone knows sick and injured people need ginger ale!"

[am41]

Well, you have me hooked. I can't wait to read more!

[phreakycat]

Thank you! I'm working on chapter 2, I promise. :)

[gershwhen]

Great start! Lots of good tension, characterization and a nice intro. Looking forward to finding out what happens.

[phreakycat]

Thank you so much! It's great to hear that the characterization was alright, as that's something that I'm always very nervous about getting right. Especially with a character as verbose and witty as Danno. :)

[hopeleslihooked]

I eagerly await more.

[phreakycat]

LOL thank you. :)

[mittaines]

I need more, yes I know I'm greedy :)