Supernatural Fanfic: Esau Have I Hated, 1/1

Nov 25, 2010 11:44

Title:  Esau Have I Hated
Genre: Angst
Length: ~2,000 words
Warnings: Some swearing, non-graphic sex (canon Sam/Ruby, only in passing), violence on par with the show.
Summary:  The architecture of an addiction exposed.

A/N:  This is a response to a prompt on the h/c challenge over on ohsam .  The prompt was "The first time Sam drinks Ruby's blood."  I had ( Read more... )

fic, prompt, supernatural

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borgmama1of5 November 25 2010, 22:17:48 UTC
Very intense. Excellent writing of Sam's taint and how it takes control of him.

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phreakycat November 25 2010, 23:25:51 UTC
Thank you. :) It was a little intense to write, too!

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4422shini November 26 2010, 00:15:32 UTC
That was fantastic. I really like how you've tied it all together. I wish the show would do that, or at least more completely.

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phreakycat November 26 2010, 00:26:44 UTC
Oh, you and me both, darlin'! Thanks for the kind feedback!

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werty30 November 26 2010, 05:59:52 UTC
Wow, that`s fantastic. I`m just sitting here amazed that you turned my simple prompt into this compelling character study. The seed of addiction was planted in Sam before he could walk... So tragic. But it can`t be all bad if there`s protective!Dean in the end! typo: It should be Esau in the title

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phreakycat November 26 2010, 06:16:43 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And of course, protective!Dean is a must!

Also: Ack! Dyslexia rears its ugly head again!

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lazy_8s November 26 2010, 14:01:12 UTC

Awesome fi! I loved the angst at the end, at Sam's horror of the extent of his manipulation. Also, Dean was wonderful in his comfort of Sam.

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phreakycat November 27 2010, 04:27:54 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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vail_kagami November 26 2010, 14:35:02 UTC
Fantastic fic! I love how it illustrated how the blood affected Sam all his life, not just those final two years.
And that last scene... what I wouldn't have given for something like that to happen on the show!

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phreakycat November 27 2010, 04:28:56 UTC
You and me both, sister! I miss the Sam and Dean bond. And thank you for the kind feedback!

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