This is so not me

Mar 24, 2008 01:38

*** Crossposted from My Wordpress***

To fail is futile, but not to attempt even once is worse. So here’s my first attempt at poetry since I entered college.

Hmm, this post will be continuously edited with the help of my CW friends. Here’s to hoping that I can finally have my own freeverse.

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onesideofjess March 24 2008, 06:11:42 UTC
Sorry I will be un-helpable (my idea of poetry is sad elementary rhyming), but I had to comment to say...

I LOVE THIS:
how lead injures a crust of paper

Hee. I got internal goosebumps.

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phonologist March 24 2008, 11:28:19 UTC
Thanks, Jess! I also like that part, I dunno what I was thinking when I thought of that line. Haha.

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