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Be

Dec 08, 2008 21:27

Title: Be

Author: Aznmen

Pairing: JaeHo/YunJae

Rating: PG-13

Genre: fluff/general

Summary: you’re this book just waiting for me to open and study, read everything I possibly can, only to close it and find a new title, a new beginning, a new middle and ending.
A/N: Dedicated to naomi, for being awesome~ (sorry for not doing the qmi one, but i thought you' ( Read more... )

p:yunho/jaejoong, fic:one-shot, fandom: dbsk, genre:general, fic:100challenge, genre:fluff, rating:pg13, character:yunho, character:jaejoong, p:jaejoong/yunho

Comments 8

aribrikapanda1 December 9 2008, 04:27:39 UTC

Poor poor Yunho has to live with such torture XP

enchanted1312 December 9 2008, 06:47:40 UTC

there's something special, that's the first foremost thing i have to say when i read this. maybe because it's said using first person pov. there's a bit of melancholy angst in the beginning but slowly and gradually going to crack-ness.

“You’ll be the death of me yet, Jae.”

You crawl over briefly, kiss me openmouthed and sensual, and then go back to the other side of the bed, laughingly leaving behind a “Have fun in the afterlife.”

now, afterlife wouldn't be fun with jae, yun-ah. :)

aznmen December 9 2008, 11:56:10 UTC

Hahaha, maybe because at first I was wanting angst, but then I was like 'heck with it, it's yunjae, it can't get that angsty xD' and then it ran away (although at a certain point it was going to go angsty again, but i erased a whole bunch of it so it would stay short XD)

eiira December 10 2008, 04:49:43 UTC

“I’ll be whatever you want me to be. Tell me what you want.”

My heart thumps, a little erratic, my chest hurting a little bit, and I can only look at you. “Just be.”

Perfect!!!!

evil jae teasing yunho like that!

dreamrainydays January 2 2009, 08:06:55 UTC

YOU.
GUH. YOU. EEEEE link me to things like this! *bouncebounce* Gosh. "Just be."

LOL the ending. Tease!Jae's always fun to read. And refusingtobeagirl!Jae.

And Epik High? Which album? ^_~

lovelessending January 2 2009, 17:16:14 UTC

But. This is fail. I couldn't possibly link you to this XD Not when you're the almighty!

Em~ Album Five: 'Pieces, Part One'! It's my favourite song, all it's called is 'Be'. I was also thinking of 'I Just Wanna Be' (Album 1: Just Listen) by Se7en xDD

chloe1910 January 18 2009, 18:10:39 UTC

naugthy, naughty Jae..

Comment mussemaria March 14 2009, 10:26:58 UTC

Omo.. Jaejoong is baaaad XD But I really like your.. shot story, right? Yes, I just call it fanfic then XD I like that Yunho seems so confused about him in the start, so cute, and Jaejoong knowing what he wants. Beside it's hot writing <33 If I could rate the fanfic, I would give this one 5 stars