Comments | phoenix_melody: [1075] Because my computer is dead..

phoenix_melody

[1075] Because my computer is dead..

Oct 10, 2011 18:33

...and this was on a locked entry and I'm bored and want to share. And who knows, maybe it will go somewhere again. After two hours of dodging parked and abandoned cars, taking a turn dragging a backpack full of supplies or Shikamaru up an increasingly steep road, and nothing but static on the radio, Sakura was almost ready for some zombies to show ( Read more... )

ficcage, zombies, fi is fi

Comments 3

chibidrunksanzo October 13 2011, 01:59:30 UTC

*content sigh* Ah, more characters to torture.

wow. anonymous November 1 2011, 10:31:14 UTC

I've just finished reading the whole thing and... wow. You made me like zombies again and this is kind of achievement, I must say.
As for constructive critisism? I can't assess language and shit like that, since English isn't my mother tongue, but I can tell you that your story is one of the best I've read. Even if I don't like constant POVs switching, you've made it logical and clear and... well, yeah, just like it a lot.
Sasuke, Neji and Gaara in one story are too awesome to be true ^^
hope you'll get an inspiration anytime soon, because I'm dying to read more.

anonymous February 5 2012, 23:18:38 UTC

Oh, wow, you stopped just before the sand siblings could join? D:

I suppose that's just. The level of badass would have gotten too high. And at the very least, I can still imagine Itachi as a good brother who was just prepared for any emergancy that happened. It just so happened that Zombies were the next big thing. It could have just as easily been an earthquake or a bomb.

I hope you regain your inspiration, but considering it has been over a year since you last wrote for this universe, I think the chances are low. So thank you for writing what you did write.