[1051] Zombie Side Story: Hyuuga Twins

[phoenix_melody]

This one is also Askerian's fault, who asked for a drabble with Hiashi & Hizashi. The prompt was "I refuse." Said prompt didn't actually make it into this, but it's 1,200+ words long already, and I liked this stopping point.

As usual, this is in all its un-beta'd glory and comments are most certainly welcome. ♥

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II

Comments

[askerian]

the idea of kabuto being just an innocent student is pfffright. I love all the sense of "okay this is a strange day where unpleasant things are happening to other people, i think i'mma go home early, stupid work" -- the last line is especially gut-punchy in light of that.

♥

[phoenix_melody]

Kabuto's cameo made me giggle. >.> And I am very happy you liked the last line. I was quite proud of it.

Thanks for commenting! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

And thus closes Act II.

[sna32]

As I said, this was just great fun to read, Fi! I think my fave aspect of it was the original idea and the understated oh-so-hyuuga execution. Hiashi and Hizashi with box seats for the zombie apocalypse... but they're still focussed on minding the family business.

I just loved reading it!

[phoenix_melody]

I'm glad you had fun! And the Hyuuga twins can be so much fun sticking in ridiculous situations like this. The universe totally loves playing evil jokes on them.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^-^

[phoenix_melody]

And thus closes Act II.

[lexkixass]

Love the bit with Kabuto. And yes, can totally seeing utter chaos breaking out and the business still what's forefront on their minds.

For now.

[phoenix_melody]

For about the next three seconds. Then their priorities are going to change radically. >.> *pets them* Thanks for commenting!

[moocow33]

wow that got my heart beating like anything - am definitely going to go read the rest if they are as gripping as this :D

[phoenix_melody]

Glad you liked it! And you should start from the beginning--there are lot more exciting pieces. :D

Thanks for reading and commenting! If you don't mind me asking, how'd you find me?

[moocow33]

just did and wow, mind blowing you got my horror itch going full swing so i ended up watching [REC] instead of studying ><

Im pretty sure I did the usual creepy lurker thing and found you through askerian's friend page post thingy :)

[phoenix_melody]

And thus closes Act II.

[rochan01]

Love the way you snuck in the Kabuto cameo appearance. He's spin-doctoring the evidence, as always!

I see Hiashi is very much the one in charge, wonder what he'll do after this cliff-hanger.

[phoenix_melody]

Kabuto will always and forever be up to no good. >.>

And your guess is as good as mine. XD Thanks for commenting! ♥