[1034] Act II, Scene III, Tenten

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene III clocks in at almost 4,000 words. Tenten had a lot of story to tell apparently. It's now time for me to pass out. Hope you enjoy!

Standard disclaimers apply™.

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II
Scene I, Sasuke
Scene I, Naruto
Scene II, Shikamaru
Scene II, Sasuke
Scene III, Neji
Scene III, Tenten
Scene IV, Tenten
Scene IV, Sakura

Comments

[lexkixass]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

TENTEEEEEEEEEEEEEN.

*_*

Nicely done. Liked the alert, too. And poor Sakura; she's the most shell-shocked of all of them.

Not surprised at all that Tenten's a markswoman. Give her a projectile, and she will be awesome. And that's about the best I can do at 4am. :P Very very nice. ^^ I want to know what happens next.

[phoenix_melody]

Ahaha, I got a sparkly eyes emoticon. ♥

I'm glad you liked the piece, and yes, I wanted to preserve Tenten's supernatural aiming skills in this universe, 'cuz the poor kids need some kind of advantage. XD Thanks for commenting!

[phoenix_melody]

And here's Act II, Scene IV for your reading pleasure. ♥

[tephralynn]

Well barns aren't that defensible but at least they're also generally farther away from large groups of people. They should be glad those large doors have a latch and apparently swing out. My folks' barn has pocket doors that slide to one side and basically have nothing but two wire hooks to hold them closed (one that links them together, one that links the one farthest from the pocket to the wall). Oh, and they only hang from a rail at the top, so if you manage to get something under them you can pop them right off and then fall inside the barn.... Note to self, the folk's barn is bad for hiding from zombies.

[phoenix_melody]

Yeah, barns are not good places for zombie apocalypses. >.> Unfortunately, the kids don't have much choice at the moment.

BTW, thanks for all the commenting you've done on the scenes. It makes my day to see that people are coming back and enjoying what I'm writing. ♥

[phoenix_melody]

And here's Act II, Scene IV for your reading pleasure. ♥

[hiza_chan]

This was great. I am totally cheering for a potential barnhouse showdown full of gore and zombies, but I think that's just because I've been playing Left for Dead 2 too much. Also, I have a morbid curiousity and kind of want one of them to get turned. Cause y'know, the possibility of the seven of them making it out okay is um, very slim. But ya! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

Glad you enjoyed the piece! And I also have a morbid curiosity over the possibility of one of them getting turned, but I haven't given it too much though at the moment. Work is eating me D:

Thanks for all the commenting you've done--it makes my day to see people coming back regularly! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

And here's Act II, Scene IV for your reading pleasure. ♥

[flourite_roses]

Ahahaha! Her aim rocks! ♥ Could be that I'm too tired to appreciate this probably, but, TENTENNNNNNNNNNN~! Dark!Sakura pwns all too. ♥

Also, I predict a horror scene with lots of gore and maybe a left behind Shikamaru?? DDD: YOU KNOW YOU DON'T WANT TO DO ITTTTTTTTTTTTT. Author's right. T^T

[phoenix_melody]

Hee, Tenten's been a blast to write in this 'verse--glad to know you still like her! And yes, Sakura's getting back into the action. She'll have more fun moments as the story continues. ^-^

You'll have to wait and see~ ♥

[phoenix_melody]

And here's Act II, Scene IV for your reading pleasure. ♥

[flourite_roses]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :D YES I'M HYPER LOLOL

[kitty11chan]

I agree that Tenten should keep her mad weapon skills. At least they got a bit of a break.

[phoenix_melody]

It's nice to have a place for a few hours' sleep. I'm glad you agree with Tenten's skills! Thanks again for commenting--I'll send you a link when the next bit is done!

[phoenix_melody]

And here's Act II, Scene IV for your reading pleasure. ♥