Comments | phoenix_melody: [1032] Act II, Scene II, Sasuke

phoenix_melody

[1032] Act II, Scene II, Sasuke

May 29, 2010 01:00

In which Sasuke spends most of these 1,800 words grumpy. Poor kid. As always, in its unbeta'd glory. Comments, questions, constructive criticism, keyboard smashing, are all welcome ( Read more... )

sasuke, zombies

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kitty11chan May 29 2010, 09:54:28 UTC

Oh yeah, can I call 'em or what? *is smug* Poor Sasuke, having to be in that position.

phoenix_melody May 29 2010, 13:51:10 UTC

Poor everyone, really. *pets them* Thanks for commenting!

phoenix_melody May 31 2010, 07:34:41 UTC

Scene III with Tenten.

lexkixass May 29 2010, 13:37:27 UTC

Very nice. Nice reactions on Sasuke's part, too.

And go, Lee! ♥

(I don't think I got a link to this part, though... I just saw it on my f-list.)

phoenix_melody May 29 2010, 13:52:46 UTC

Thanks! Sasuke was difficult to write this time around, but I'm glad you liked him and Lee.

(That's because you're actually on my f-list. XD You'll see it whether I send you a link or not. I can send you a link from now on if you like.)

lexkixass May 29 2010, 16:13:38 UTC

Ohhhh~ :)

Please do. XD I don't check my f-list every day. ♥

phoenix_melody May 29 2010, 17:01:06 UTC

Duly noted! I shall pretend that you are some random internet stranger in the future. ♥

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tephralynn May 29 2010, 16:49:44 UTC

I am relieved that it seems to be just a concussion. Of course, this is a zombie AU so relaxing too early is ill advised, maybe I shouldn't be relieved just yet. ^.^;

phoenix_melody May 29 2010, 17:02:20 UTC

Relaxing too early is always ill advised when something might stumble out of the corn fields and gnaw on your face. ^-^

Thanks for commenting! ♥

phoenix_melody May 31 2010, 07:35:04 UTC

Scene III with Tenten.

sometimesafox May 30 2010, 04:12:38 UTC

This is a captivating series, I really like your style of writing. I can't wait to read the next part!

phoenix_melody May 30 2010, 04:20:08 UTC

Hee, I'm glad you like the series and my style of writing. ♥ Thanks for commenting--I'll be sure to send you a link when the next bit is out!

phoenix_melody May 31 2010, 07:35:21 UTC

Scene III with Tenten.

rosalui May 30 2010, 14:17:52 UTC

Love it. ^_____^ Also, this is the first time I've ever wanted to smack Lee for an over-reaction. >.>

phoenix_melody May 30 2010, 18:24:53 UTC

Glad to hear you loved it! As for Lee, well, Sasuke might've shot Neji, so... >.>;

Thanks for your comment--I'll be sure to send you a link for the next part when it's out!

phoenix_melody May 31 2010, 07:35:37 UTC

Scene III with Tenten.