In a Flawed Glass - Doctor Who - PG-13

[phoenix64]

Title: In a Flawed Glass
Author: phoenix64
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Jack, Lucy Saxon
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, some nasty violence
Word Count: 273
Spoilers: Just the end of s3
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine, nothing untoward intended, I'll put them back when I'm finished in the same condition (mostly) as they were in when I borrowed them
Notes: This hasn't

Comments

[shinealightonme]

Very chilling, especially the line about realizing that she had never talked to him.

[phoenix64]

I'm so glad it worked - thanks for reading and commenting!

[aeron_lanart]

I need a creepy icon, because this is *well* creepy. Actually it goes beyond creepy. Bloody good though.

[phoenix64]

Wow, thank you!

I have to admit, that bat is too cute to be creepy. Of course it might just be me.

[rustydog]

Wow. ::shivers:: I agree, very chilling, because it is so intimate. I'm especially loving the bits about Harry because -- I guess because it surprised me, showing the way Harry is involved but not really.

[phoenix64]

Thank you so much!

Yes, I have to admit one thing about Lucy is that I don't think she gets all the credit due her for being crazycakes all on her own. She really does fascinate me a bit, both by herself and her relationship with Harry.

[travels_in_time]

Oh my. *hides*

I think we get so distracted by the singing dancing laughing crazy that we forget the absolute freaking sadistic crazy. Good reminder here.

[phoenix64]

Aha, I sent you behind the couch! That means I win!

[karaokegal]

Whoah! Brilliant and chilling. I love this, because it's one of those things that could easily have happened during THE YEAR. Poor Jack, but in a way Poor Lucy too.

[phoenix64]

The final episodes of s3 are just so incredibly rich with storytelling potential, and yes, I have to admit one of my first thoughts upon finishing the series was, "I want Jack and Lucy fic, NOW please."

And hey, I get Jack!arse. Go me!