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Fic: Riding Lessons

Jun 20, 2012 10:34

Title: Riding Lessons
Author: phoenikxs
Fandom: A Song of Ice and Fire
Pairing: Dany/Jorah
Rating: R
Word Count: 1952
Summary: There are some things even Doreah can’t teach Dany.
Author's Note: Written for the game of ships porn battle and the prompt "riding lessons".

( Riding Lessons )

jorah mormont, dany/jorah, dany x jorah, daenerys targaryen, fanfic, game of thrones, dany and jorah, a song of ice and fire

Comments 7

mrstater June 20 2012, 10:44:45 UTC

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I hope that keyboard smashing adequately conveyed the depth of my love for this fic, even though there was a decided lack of umlauts. I'll do it again for good measure.

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So. This fic. Is basically the Jorah/Dany smut I've wanted to read for ages. Jorah fantasizing about Dany with Doreah? Check. Dany not suffering from Stockholm Syndrome? Check. Hot sexytimes? Check check check!

And then you had to go and have Jorah say "I serve at the pleasure of my princess," which I've just absolutely longed for in a fic in some way, and just sent me over the edge of happiness.

Lovely job with this, my dear! A fine example of PWP. In-character but cutting straight to the chase. Perfect.

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phoenikxs June 20 2012, 11:28:45 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH, HON *flails*

As you know, I was pretty scared to post this without running it by you first, but I'm so glad I did and that for once you got to wake up to a lovely surprise and some early morning porn :)

So, so glad you enjoyed this. Especially that last line, which took me forever to come up with.

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phoenikxs June 20 2012, 13:38:46 UTC

It makes me so happy to hear that you thought it was hot and in character. And the fact that you could hear it in their voices just made my day!

Thank you so much!

kimcooperx June 20 2012, 23:06:49 UTC

Ugh, so so perf <3
That last line is just adorable.
I am out of incoherent thoughts.
*rushes off to read again*

phoenikxs June 21 2012, 09:03:57 UTC

What a great comment to wake up to :D
Thank you so much for reading. And, of course, for enjoying ;)

just_a_dram June 21 2012, 18:48:41 UTC

This is PWP done right, which I usually entirely fail at, so kudos for that, my dear. Also, hawt. This kind of AU is right up my alley. :D

You were our first porn battle poster! You should get a prize for that.

phoenikxs June 22 2012, 08:06:10 UTC

This is my first PWP, so it's good to know I was doing it right. Thank you!

And I agree, I totally should get a prize! Or a medal. Or porn. Oh, wait.... ;)