broken : Chapter 7 : Retaliation

[phobmuffin]

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[mrs_koki]

The length is fine, thanks for updating XD

I'm sorry to hear about your grandpa.*hugs*

[phobmuffin]

That's a relief, then, I suppose. It stops kind of abruptly, though xD

Koki's not a bad guy, don't worry~! >w

[mrs_koki]

Yeah but it makes for a great cliff hanger....I like it ^_^

Yeah I know. But I hope he can at least convince Kame to have his wound treated, even if he refuses Koki's help right after. XD

[phobmuffin]

We'll have to see what he does~!
He'll probably be reluctant regardless, though xD

[racanai]

A much welcomed update to be a much welcomed bedtime story! ^^

I'm impressed with Kame! And I can understand why Koki kept only watching and decided to step onto the scene only to help Kame. With how he's behaving I wonder if Koki's effort will succeed, though.

Sorry to hear about your grandpa! :(

[phobmuffin]

Bedtime story~? xD Well, I'm glad it's become that for you ;P

I'm glad you do! I was half-worried Koki'd end up looking like a coward >^<
Kame might give Koki a chance. He's just pretty scared right now~

[shiharipanda]

woah o_O surprised Kame got so violent!!! ........ me gusta *_*~

I'm sorry about your grandpa T_T~
I hope you're feeling better!
And good luck for your exams!!

waiting anxious for the next chapter!!! :D

[phobmuffin]

THAT GUY DESERVED IT >D
And, yeaaaah, badass Kame ;D Honestly, I'm not so huge on the idea of him being scared all the time (at least at this part), so some total badassery balances it out ;P

Aa, it's my sister's exams, though~! Mine aren't until Feb! =w=

I'll get it up as soon as I can, seeing as that bloody essay's done with ;P

[shiharipanda]

Thanks for this <33333
He got desesperated and out of control. I love those contrasts *____*

ah sorry I wanted to mean your essay and said exams xD~~
good work!! o/

[shiharipanda]

*pokes*

I hope you're ok D: Happy New Year ^-^/

[ayame_hadouken]

geez, that was intense

also i'm sorry to hear about the rl no-fun

<3<3<3

[dori_liv]

thanks for the update. Kame's attack was really vicious! But the guy deserved it i guess