[poetry] the pain of practice makes us perfect

Dec 31, 2009 19:15

this inspiration for the second part of this was the metal dance-step diagrams on the sidewalks in our neighborhood - they get very hot in the summer. i've had this partly done for about five months and just finished it up. go me. <3 her hands ( Read more... )

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hobbitblue January 1 2010, 03:53:07 UTC
Like, as ever.

Though confused on the whole "metal dance-step diagrams on the sidewalks in our neighborhood" concept...?

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phinnia January 2 2010, 05:40:34 UTC
i will tryand get a picture in the next few days. it's one of those things that makes sense when you see a picture. <3

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hobbitblue January 2 2010, 12:49:30 UTC
Ok, ta :)

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gimp_mom January 1 2010, 04:58:11 UTC
I love the imagery, especially the second part.:)

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phinnia January 2 2010, 05:40:42 UTC
thank you!

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newtypeshadow January 12 2010, 06:44:12 UTC
The language you use is so fluid and poetic! ♥♥♥

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