I like the way you have Piotr adapting to new conditions so rapidly - as he would have had to do in his normal environment - and working out how to apply the skills he has. I like very much that you have Ezar and Kly equally competent (which any adequate resistance needs, of course, but I do approve your avoiding the protagonist-does-everything trap).
Thanks! I enjoy writing Piotr and Ezar together, they have so many different dynamics at different times. And I'm glad the action worked, because I always find that difficult to write.
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AU provides such fascinating possibilities.
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And thanks for the v-gift, too! *blush* I'm glad you enjoy my stories :-D.
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