Fic: Dirtsucker

Dec 14, 2011 20:32

Written for the prompt Vorkosigan Saga, Piotr Vorkosigan, leaving Barrayar.

Title: Dirtsucker
Content: PG
Length: 2100 words
Summary: Piotr in space.

Dirtsucker )

piotr, ezar, fics, commentfic

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hedda62 December 14 2011, 21:20:46 UTC
Yay! Nice adventure, and I like that they each got to do something important. Piotr rocks.

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philomytha December 15 2011, 19:01:16 UTC
Thanks! I didn't want Piotr to hoard all the heroics for himself. ;-)

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leni_jess December 14 2011, 21:27:53 UTC
I like the way you have Piotr adapting to new conditions so rapidly - as he would have had to do in his normal environment - and working out how to apply the skills he has. I like very much that you have Ezar and Kly equally competent (which any adequate resistance needs, of course, but I do approve your avoiding the protagonist-does-everything trap).

AU provides such fascinating possibilities.

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philomytha December 15 2011, 19:02:10 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the sharing of jobs - I didn't want Piotr to get all the action to himself.

And thanks for the v-gift, too! *blush* I'm glad you enjoy my stories :-D.

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philomytha December 15 2011, 19:02:56 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it's working for you. I definitely write it because I want more of the books.

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askerian December 15 2011, 08:28:44 UTC
Awesome action scene! Everything was vivid and fast-paced, loved it. I also really enjoyed the dynamic with Ezar, quite a reversal from later on. :D

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philomytha December 15 2011, 19:03:48 UTC
Thanks! I enjoy writing Piotr and Ezar together, they have so many different dynamics at different times. And I'm glad the action worked, because I always find that difficult to write.

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rogerstening December 15 2011, 08:58:12 UTC
Excellent work :-) I look forward to more, naturally :-D

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philomytha December 15 2011, 19:04:20 UTC
Thanks! And hey, I got one thing ticked off my WIP list. No telling when the next will be :-).

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