i really really like this. i like that ellen cares for the dead and that she's honest about who she is and what she wants - she'd rather die than do what those other girls did to get it. Giggle and play dumb and put on a fake blush - and there's a little bit of jo's restlessness in her plan to leave. i really like how she meets bill, and that she yells at him for not picking up his bottles.
Comments 20
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
*grins* You know what? I didn't even think of it! Purely subconscious.
Reply
Reply
and there's a little bit of jo's restlessness in her plan to leave
*beams & nods* It's just impossible for a woman as strong (and stubborn) as Ellen not to have brushed off on her daughter in more ways than one. :)
Reply
thank you
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
I'm so delighted that you enjoyed it!
Reply
Leave a comment