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[philomel]

Umbra, Penumbra
Fandom: LOTR RPS
Pairing: Dom/Sir Ian
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Even right-side up, the world may be upside down.
Warning: bondage, s/D tones
Word Count: 1,255
Disclaimer: Lies, lies, lies, yeah.
Feedback: Love it! Will feed it with cookies.
Beta: the ever-beautiful raynemaiden. Thank you, love! :)

Happy, Happy Birthday to the celestial themoononastick!!! :D

Comments

[feelforfaith]

Duuuude! This is ... whoa. I'm lacking words here. I could say something about how I'm not into Ian when it involves sex, but it would be pointless, because you have undone me with this fic. Totally. :D. Brilliant, everything about it. And the ending... GUH.

A tiny typo in "He jerked at the roots of >>Dominc's hair." but I noticed it only on the second reading, lol.

[philomel]

*beams* I've seen comments like that from a lot of people with other Dom/Ian fics - not being interested in reading Ian in a sexual context and then getting reeled in anyway. There's just something about him... especially when he's with Dom. Clearly, Dom's to blame. As always. ;) That you liked this makes me giddy. Thank you!!

p.s. Thank you for catching the typo as well. *tucks in an "i" and scolds useless spellcheck* (Yay, second reading!)

[elmathelas]

Perfection. Just long enough, just enough shown and not told. Lovely.

[philomel]

Ooh, thank you!! :D

*delighted*

[queenbtch]

Oh. My. God. This is gorgeous. I love the whole thing, but you had me at your first two sentences.

Not his style. Not his modus operandi. This.

This indelicate surge of power made him question himself to the core.

Sooooo Ian.

[philomel]

*blushes*

I'm thrilled that you found Ian believable in this. He's an endlessly fascinating man, but (or perhaps because of that) he's a challenging little minx to try to capture. ;D

Thank you!

[themoononastick]

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh. *is incoherent*

...

Oh. My. Dom. GUH! So fucking, gloriously wriggle inducingly HOT. I LOVE it. And you.

There is so much that I want to pick out that if I do highlight them all I will just be reposting the entire thing in comment form so I shall pick just one...

Ian imagined tiny shreds of leather feathering off and clinging to him, black speckling the raw, red flesh.

*has a moment*

THANK YOU!
*ADORES*

¡♥!

[philomel]

Wheeheee! *aflutter* I'm really, really happy you liked it! At one point, I was hoping to come up with a Viggo/Ian for your birthday fic, but the idea wouldn't take form. Thank goodness Dom is so willing to whore himself out at a moment's notice. ;)

Nuh uh. Thank YOU! *hugs*

¡♥!

[feelforfaith]

Thank goodness Dom is so willing to whore himself out at a moment's notice. ;)

That's what we like about the boy... :D.

[philomel]

LOL
Hurray for whore-ability versatility!

[zelda_zee]

Oh holy shit. This is really not my thing, really it's not. So why do I find it so fucking, unbelievably hot? I'm not into RPS, not into Dom, certainly not into Ian,(ok, I admit, the bondage part, I'm kinda into that), but good god I'm dyin' here!

Maybe this really is my thing and I just didn't know it.

This fic was so well written, I'm a bit in awe of your ability to find just the perfect word, the one that will pack precisely the right punch, and put it in precisely the right place.

Well, I'm done for the night. No point in reading anything more, b/c nothing is going to seem hot after this.

[philomel]

SQUEE! This comment just made my day (well, night). *hands you plateful of cookies*

Also? Mwuahahaha! You cannot resist the Dom or the Ian. It is futile! ;D And bondage always helps. *nods sagely*

Thank you for taking a chance on this. And... just, thank you so much!! You've got me blushing and beaming here. :)