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[philomel]

The Scientist
Dominic Monaghan/Viggo Mortensen
NC-17
Summary: An experiment in drawing with carbon, breath and other media.
Disclaimer: Lies, lies, lies, yeah.
Feedback: Love it! Will feed it with a cookie.
Beta: themoononastick. And, although she beta’d it, I’m going to dedicate this to her, for sharing the mad love. ¡♥!

Comments

[vensre]

Mm, my gosh. They get to me. Dom gets to me.

::rereads::

...::rerereads::

[philomel]

He finds people out, Dom does.

[thingsunseen]

Gorgeous story. I'm...oh. Can't even find the words.

*reads again*
*adds to memories*

[philomel]

*wriggles* Ah, I'm delighted you like it! :D

<3

Thank you, dear.

[themoononastick]

¡♥!

I think I said something about gushing on about how great this is and the highlighting of favourite lines.... but you know what... I just can't find the words to express how much I love this story. Plus I can't highlight and quote the whole thing so.... but then this bit demands that I highlight..

"You," he whispered into Dom's mouth. "I want you. I want to breathe in you." He nipped at him. "All that carbon. I want it. Don't need anything else right now."

Just gorgeous.

I swear I have read the version you sent me every single day and I still can't get enough of it and now with the changes you've made its simply breathtaking and I've been sitting here for about half an hour now trying to think of something intelligent to say and I just.......Je suis désolé mais je ne peux pas trouver les bons mots again in French it sounds prettier!

Je l'aime. Je t'aime.

[philomel]

I dunno, that looks like gushing to me! And it warms my heart more than I can express. I'm immensely delighted by how much you like it. That's the loveliest feedback I could ever get. :D

Pas du tout. Merci, ma chérie!

*squishes you close*

¡♥! ¡♥! ¡♥!

(<-- eep! They reproduce! Fear the revolution!)

[theboysgonehome]

Far, far too pretty.

Well done.

[philomel]

Thank you. ^__^

[mactink]

Beautiful.

You've managed to combine two things that I love, the sensual side of Viggo's art (ie him painting on anyone - or using charcoal in this case) and Viggo/Dom.

And the mental imagery? *melts into puddle*

[philomel]

Thank you so much!

I love the idea of Viggo (or Dom) painting on another person's flesh, although I worry it gets used in Viggo-centric fics so much as to become cliche. So I'm very glad this worked for you. :)