NCIS: Tony/Maddie Mollenard aka "Hatred" (1938)

[philleegirl]

Title: Mollenard aka "Hatred" (1938)
Fandom: NCIS
Series: The Bachelor and the Bobbysoxer
Characters/Pairing: Tony DiNozzo/Maddie Tyler and Seaman Sammie Weeks (OC)
Prompts:For 12_stories Dark Table #1 Hatred
Word Count: 218
Rating: T
Summary: And Tony was sure that they would always be forgotten hours of his life.
Author's Notes: The second part of The

Comments

[citymusings]

Oh, wow. That was beautiful. Particularly the middle paragraph. Very good. Very realistic. Well done.

[philleegirl]

Thank you, sweetie.

[philleegirl]

Thank you glad it resonated.

[nakeisha]

Wow!

I too echo how powerful the middle paragraph is.

Poor Tony.

[philleegirl]

Thank you! I guess the middle paragraph did it for everyone.

[nakeisha]

I think it did.

So few words, but boy you packed a real punch in them.

[msgills]

it's like an oreo - the whole thing is great but everyones favorite part is the middle!!!!! can't wait to read more!

[philleegirl]

This maybe my favorite review ever!