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philleegirl

New NCIS Fic: In Case the Star Stops Shining

Mar 19, 2008 20:32

Title: In Case the Star Stops Shining
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Everybody in the Emily!verse
Prompt: #46 Star
Word Count: 6953
Rating: T - for violence
Summary: Using her right arm only, she ripped off her shirt and quickly packed it against her wound.
Author's Notes: This is an AU, inspired in part by wiccagirl24’s wonderful Kelly!verse. This is the second ( Read more... )

ncis: character: fornell, ncis: character: maddie, ncis: au character: emily gibbs, ncis: series: the emily verse, ncis: character: gibbs, ncis: character: mcgee, ncis: character: tony, ncis: character: ziva, ncis: het: gibbs/abby, ncis: het: tony/maddie, ncis: character: abby, ncis: het: fornell/ofc

Comments 18

lynna12000 March 20 2008, 01:57:13 UTC

I am going to be so sad when this story ends. You've kept all the characters note perfect. And I would LOVE to read 'Star' in its' entirety.

Thank you for sharing. This installment has been well worth the wait.

philleegirl March 20 2008, 04:18:29 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked.

I'm going to be sad to see this universe end as well and I'm sure I could tell a few hundred more stories, but I want it wrapped up in a neat little bow!

philleegirl March 20 2008, 04:19:42 UTC

Oh, and I don't think I'd ever be able to write "Star" I'll leave that to Mr. Gemcity or anyone who wants to take a crack.

prettyblueroses March 20 2008, 06:09:59 UTC

Oh how I have missed you!! ... I don't even have the words to describe what this did to me. I almost cried a million times! Emily is so brave and wonderful, and I really really enjoyed that Tim saved her and grew closesr to her. I think I am going to be completely devastated when this story ends. I love it so much!

philleegirl March 22 2008, 02:04:22 UTC

Thanks, my dear! I'm sorry for the near tears. I felt bad for Tim and had to fix it. Thanks for your support for the series. One more and it shall be done.

kalliekat March 20 2008, 07:40:12 UTC

wow, a work of art! i can't believe it's so close to ending. this is and has been an amazing series, so visual, and the characters fitting so well. and this one in particular is awesome!

philleegirl March 22 2008, 02:01:33 UTC

Aw! Thank you! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the series. I've enjoyed writing it. I'm glad you really like this one, it was a hard one to write.

amichandrn March 23 2008, 14:01:22 UTC

I honestly am enjoying this fic a lot more than I thought I would! It's really sweet!

But I'm curious. Which girl and school in Philly was this? I'm trying to remember, and I can't!

philleegirl March 24 2008, 03:37:58 UTC

Thanks! I glad you ended up liking it.

Yikes, I have to admit that I don't really remember the details. It happened when I was in College, so that's over 10 years now. I think it was at MLK or Overbrook and it had something to do with a drug deal gone wrong, but the girl's name and the real details are lost. Frankly, it could have even happened in the 'burbs.

horseriderjen March 28 2008, 15:22:36 UTC

Very nice!! I really like the way you write Tony :) I'm going to miss this series

philleegirl March 29 2008, 18:36:15 UTC

Thank you! I think I'm going to miss it, too. But it will be nice to put a bow on it.