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philleegirl

New NCIS Fic: Food for Thought

Feb 26, 2008 22:15

Title: Food for Thought
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Abby, Emily, Tony, Gibbs and a few OC’s.
Prompt: #59 Food
Word Count: 4,016
Rating: T
Summary: She was having enough trouble fitting in with the older kids in some of her Advance Placement courses. She wanted to just relax and enjoy the soccer team.
Warning: Angst and eating disorders. Emily’s now ( Read more... )

ncis: character: tony, ncis: het: gibbs/abby, ncis: au character: emily gibbs, ncis: character: abby, ncis: series: the emily verse, ncis: character: gibbs

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xdawnfirex February 27 2008, 03:43:44 UTC

Abby's reaction was perfect. I could SO see her going completely crazy on that SOB.

Great installment!

philleegirl February 27 2008, 03:50:38 UTC

Thanks! Glad Abby worked for you.

(Boy, you read fast!)

citymusings February 27 2008, 03:49:43 UTC

Yeah, Mama Abby! That jerk! No girl should be treated that way. Anyway, good chapter...thought I can't picture Gibbs with a tat.

philleegirl February 27 2008, 03:53:39 UTC

Thanks! Unfortunately, many girls are treated that way and worst and don't have the support system that Em has. Aw, com'on, he's a Marine! He's so got a tat someplace. Even my bro the Coastie has a tiny tat.

citymusings February 27 2008, 04:55:49 UTC

This is true.

Wow, Em is in good shape! I'm 5'10", I'd love to be a size 6...okay, maybe not. I like my build, but still, that's very nice.

Nah, we've been told that as a Marine he was "high and tight", no nonsense. Even now I can't see him with one. I know Marines without tats. :)

philleegirl February 27 2008, 05:03:01 UTC

Well, she is a very active girl, plus I wanted to highlight the idiocy of the coach. Also, this is based on a friend of mine from HS, long before eating disorders where known or understood as well as they are now.

Nope, my Gibbs as a little tat... someplace. And trust me, my bro was 'high and tight' too. He was even the drug test supervising officer.

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prettyblueroses February 27 2008, 05:24:23 UTC

That was *amazing!* Long and beautiful and... there were so many lovely moments, I don't even know where to start!

I LOVED how Abby kicked the coach's ass... so her and so awesome! Poor Emily is struggling so much in high school, but you've written her realistically for her character that we've come to know and as someone like her would be received in high school. I loved the doctor. The scene with Emily telling Abby how she remembers the first day they met was beautiful. And I am so glad that they can work through these things as a family. That is just to start. I could tell you how much I loved every line individually, but I don't think you'd want to read all that!! =)

philleegirl February 28 2008, 03:25:49 UTC

Thanks, m'ah dear! I'm so glad you liked it.

I'm trying to write Em as realistically as I can, but it has been a while since I was a teen. I kinda loved the doc myself, maybe because she's Allison Janney in my head. Well, there are days that I wouldn't mind hearing each and every line that you really liked. (Actually, this was one of those days!)

kalliekat February 28 2008, 08:17:10 UTC

*sobs* ande *sniffles*. so well done and dealt with. wish i'd had half Abby's way of dealing with my step kids!

philleegirl February 29 2008, 03:03:11 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it. Abs unique in that she's known Em since she was a toddler and slowly evolved into a stepmom. I think that is easier.