New NCIS Fic: Punishment and Reason

Jan 21, 2008 22:26

Title: Punishment and Reason
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Abby, Gibbs, Emily
Prompt: #43 Square
Word Count: 922
Rating: T - for cursing
Summary: Damn it, Gibbs, she agreed to the rules! She’s got no reason to get pissed at me when she breaks them.
Author's Notes: This is an AU, inspired in part by wiccagirl24’s wonderful Kelly!verse.

Punishment and Reason )

ncis: het: gibbs/abby, ncis: au character: emily gibbs, ncis: character: abby, ncis: series: the emily verse, ncis: character: gibbs

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xdawnfirex January 22 2008, 04:37:25 UTC
Oh, the teen years are the WORST.

Who knew being a mother would turn me into such a square

*falls out laughing*

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philleegirl January 22 2008, 04:43:06 UTC
I know! And so hard to write, cause I want Emily to be sweet not normal teenager.

Thanks, love that line.

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citymusings January 22 2008, 05:19:23 UTC
Oh, that was wonderful!

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philleegirl January 23 2008, 05:16:03 UTC
Thanks, honey!

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kids draggon_flye January 22 2008, 06:19:39 UTC
I love this series, and I especially love that Abby came down on her & not Gibbs. She's being a mom.

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Re: kids philleegirl January 23 2008, 05:14:19 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoying the series. I was surprised that it went the way it did, but I love that I've been exploring Abby being a mom.

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prettyblueroses January 22 2008, 15:33:01 UTC
Awww! That was great. I loved the way that Gibbs handled it and how Abby was struggling with herself over what to say. And I'm glad that even though Emily is getting older, and they fight, she still has that connection with them.

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philleegirl January 23 2008, 05:00:54 UTC
Well, I like to think that they have created a good and stable family that will stand the tests of time.

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kalliekat January 22 2008, 18:25:44 UTC
ho hum. as grandmother to a 17 year old, a 12 year old and an 11 month old (same mother for all three) i just loved this! and where did Gibbs learn such tact???? yup nope.

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philleegirl January 23 2008, 04:56:20 UTC
Oh, glad it worked for you! I'm unfortunately (or fortunately) not around teenagers much, so I'm going back to my teen years. I think life has changed slightly since then.

Well, Gibbs does tend to let Abby talk things out for herself.

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