On an August Day (Ernie/Susan)

[phil_urich]

Title: On an August Day
Prompts: "Don't be angry, but..."
Pairing: Ernie/Susan
Author's note: written for ceirdwenfc my apologies for getting it to you so late. I wrote it one way and just hated the feel of it so I had to re-write it. Believe me, this one is much better.

Comments

[ceirdwenfc]

This was really nice. You've captured the realistic feeling of parents when a child is hurt. Blaming the one who was supposed to be watching them, the guilt of that parent, and the obliviousness of the child, not understanding what the fuss is about. Very enjoyable.

[phil_urich]

I'm so glad you liked it. I was kind of nervous since I've never written them before, but I thought this might be a cool story for the two of them. Thanks!

[vegablack62]

The story was very sweet and real.