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phigwhig

Wherein Minho is Desperate and Taemin is No Gentleman

Apr 26, 2012 03:10

Title: Wherein Minho is Desperate and Taemin is No Gentleman
Pairing: 2min
Rating: PG
Genre: fluffstration
Warning(s): none
Word Count: 3667

( Standing there, in the wide marble hallway with the love of his life clinging to him in a manner that should absolutely not be this warm, Minho realized he had been thoroughly steamrolled; he was sleeping with Taemin tonight. )

2min

Comments 14

honestfrank April 26 2012, 10:35:52 UTC

My love, my lovely lovely love:

I'm biased, but I love this. And you. And no, I'm not calling a spot, this is my full comment since I technically can just squee to you in person since we're sleeping together tonight. I guess I just wanted to say you write beautifully and I'm not at all guilty for making you stay up and write this bridge.

Also, I probably won't stop nagging you until you finish posting everything else, and even then I probably will find something else to nag you about since that's what I do best so this sentence is pointless.

I love you <3
/end

phigwhig April 27 2012, 00:46:19 UTC

I do declare, you are feeling sweet today. c:

and I do love you as well, if not more for keeping me up late; haha I have the feeling if you hadn't held my hand I wouldn't have had the gumption to post.
But you're right, now I have to go into crazy editing mode on the others...and...heaven forbid...POST THEM?

what have I gotten myself into with you...?

honestfrank April 27 2012, 01:44:21 UTC

(I was about to argue that it was yesterday, but I realized it was technically still today so I can't.)

((I'm always sweet.))

Anyway, yes, it was a good thing I was there because you're so worried that what you're doing isn't good enough that I have to baby you through everything. "Oh, this isn't right! I have to edit it again!" Cute the sixth, twelfth, twenty-seventh-that-is-probably-twenty-eighth-because-you-missed-one-somewhere edit.

A really good situation, that's what. I'm so happy you're posting with me now.

On a different note, there's a misplaced semicolon and a you're that should be your somewhere in there. Look for them for me, hey? It'd be sad to leave them.

hazellicious April 26 2012, 13:56:13 UTC

“What am I? Your wife or your sushi?” he complained, wriggling out of the covers to pull Minho down with him. “Now come in here, I’m chilly!”

DEAD FANGIRL ALERT YOU BETTER TAKE RESPONSIBILITY
but omg this was so sweet and kind of hot and taemin would definitely not mind minho treating him like a piece of sushi - i mean eating him. xD
AND THE CAR-SCENE WAS ADORABLE
and taemin smiling, oic, ic that little minx

CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE THIS A SEQUEL? WANT SO MUCH.

phigwhig April 27 2012, 00:53:27 UTC

omo, you're going to have to bury the body of a dead author here in a moment--deceased of spontaneous combustion at the thought that you like this so much. really, thank you so much for reading.

oh my my my I have a serious problem when it comes to minx!taemin, namely that I always let him do what he wants even when minho suffers as a result. because you're right, he wouldn't mind one tiny bit, but Minho is too thick to see that and he just burns quietly while taemin takes shameless advantage of him.

hahaa obviously my OTP here...and don't you even worry, I have numerous 2min stories coming if you wait patiently. =^.^=

hazellicious April 27 2012, 13:50:20 UTC

ooh, are you a zombie now, then?

Minho is too thick
/chokes

phigwhig April 27 2012, 22:21:30 UTC

haha what I am is obviously too innocent for this, because I totally walked into that one. :D

yui8_lin April 26 2012, 18:29:38 UTC

SPOOOT

ottoketae April 27 2012, 01:02:00 UTC

I love this ♥
The car scene and the bed scene. Everything to be exact.
It's just... I don't really know how to explain but I love the way how these two tease each other.
And oh, Minho should not worry about being so attracted to Taemin. Because I'm pretty sure that Taemin loves him back. If he doesn't, then Taemin wouldn't call himself as Minho's wife that easily.
As far as I knew, this guy hates to be pointed as a girl.

phigwhig April 27 2012, 03:05:51 UTC

I thought it was funny that Minho regarded himself as Taemin's wife as well--I didn't notice until after I posted, but both of these stubborn guys are wives, not even husbands or anything that would make sense...

also, thank you for reading! As my first story, this means a lot to me, that you like it. n_n
kamsahamnida~

ottoketae April 28 2012, 01:01:30 UTC

I think that just means that Minho and Taemin could take turns at IT.

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phigwhig April 27 2012, 22:29:49 UTC

unf YES. does anyone really realize how coy that Taemin even is? I mean really? siigh

ahahaa that is quite a lot, so thank youu! and a flustered, overthinking Minho paired with minx!taemin is seriously too much fun. wayy too much.

uwahh, I am seriously so happy you like it, kamsahamnida!