Barely breathing

[phelipa]

Title: Barely breathing
Author: Phelipa
Pairing: Miles/Juliet
Rating: Light R
A/N: Written forlost_in_108 prompt#6: Monster. The prompt use is kind of implicit, not as explicit as I would have liked ;)

Comments

[ozmissage]

Oh. My. God.

Just wow.

I love this to pieces. The end in particular just gutted me. Seriously, this pairing may be my new favorite thing. They are so dysfunctional, I love it.

[phelipa]

*hugs*
Thank you for the wonderful feedback!
Dude, you totally got me hooked on this pairing, it is freaking awesome! I've become a huge fan of Juliet/Freighties minus Frank ;)
I love dysfunctional. I would love to see them together!

[phelipa]

Thank you so much :D
I love writing Juliet - she's just so broken and cracked and imperfect, I love her!

[missy_useless]

Oh, this is great. I especially love the ending.

[phelipa]

Thank you so much :)

[bold_seer]

Oh, Juliet! Great last line; I think you handled the prompt well!

[phelipa]

Thank you so much :)

[valhalla37]

AMAZING.

I especially love this line -- she's a terrible temptress. Perfect from both perspectives.

[phelipa]

Thank you :)
I originally meant it from the "good" terrible temptress but then I thought maybe she'd be an awkward seductress ;) (is that even a word?)