I really enjoyed this, namely because I think Addison is the kind of person that would torture herself/get stuck in watching christenings. Your descriptions were amazing and I loved Mark's response and the phone call. Just ouch. Lovely work. :)
That was quite something. Your writing style is intense and detailed and its very effective; I could relate almost physically to what Addison was feeling here. Mark's reaction is very well written. The christenings and, especially the phone call at the end, were inventive and painful. Anyway . . . very good. Enjoyed reading it.
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