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pheebs1

Unseeing - Fic

Aug 31, 2006 21:30

Title: Unseeing.
Rating: PG 13, Note Swearing
Warnings: Bad Language
Pairing: Dean/OFC

Summary: For spn_flashback prompt: Dean falls for the girl next door, and when it comes time to move, it's him and not Sam that fights to stay, and John doesn't expect that.This is Outsider POV, so it’s slightly different than the prompt implied, hope it’s still ok ( Read more... )

my fic, petra

Comments 178

bluesister August 31 2006, 22:52:31 UTC

Inspired POV. I like that the boys aren't hunters in this, just kids who move a lot. You succeeded in making the characters very appealing and real.

pheebs1 September 2 2006, 21:06:50 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad her POV worked. Of course, to her, they're just kids who move around a lot, and she's no idea what's going on. Though I think she has her suspicions that something's up. I am glad the characters worked for you, thanks so much for saying so. *hugs*

fantastic! raychel86 August 31 2006, 23:21:27 UTC

*whimper*....

I loved this fic so much. I think this is probably my favorite SPN Fic ever! I don't want Dean to leave!! He must take Petra to the dance...runaway Dean runaway!!

This was just completely fantastic.

...now if they just meet up later....lol

Re: fantastic! pheebs1 September 2 2006, 21:08:18 UTC

You are too too kind. I am glad you liked it so much. And I feel kinda sad for her at the end too. She deserves to get a proper date out of him.

& well, I'm amazed people liked it enough to ask for a sequel, but a few people did, so I'm thinking about it! Just trying to decide the why's and the wherefores...

Seriously, am so happy to hear you liked it, thanks for commenting.

Re: fantastic! raychel86 September 3 2006, 00:06:45 UTC

Sequel!? Oh yes pretty please!

Re: fantastic! pheebs1 September 3 2006, 00:08:54 UTC

Hee, well if you have any opinion on when it'd be set, or what'd happen, feel free to chip in while I'm in the planning ;) I'm just pleased people might want to see more.

atthebeachgirl August 31 2006, 23:36:26 UTC

Awww pheebs, this was wonderful! So sweet and sad. I loved how you had Petra able to see the "real" Dean while everyone else was stuck on his "bad boy" exterior. I'm glad he was able to have at least one best friend in his life outside of the family.

Great job, sweetie! *hugs*

pheebs1 September 2 2006, 21:14:05 UTC

Thanks so much, I am happy to hear you liked it, I appreciate the feedback! And I'm so glad it worked that she was seeing 'through' Dean. Yay! *HUGS BACK!*

shiny_starlight August 31 2006, 23:45:05 UTC

You know, this is fantastic! It's great to have an outsider pov on Dean, someone who'se close to him.

It's also begging for a sequel, where they meet up again?....

*hopeful eyes*

pheebs1 September 2 2006, 21:16:02 UTC

I love Outsider POV. I may have to do more, ha ha!

And well, a few people asked for a sequel - to which, I'm amazed, that's so kind! So I'm trying to consider the why's and wherefores - feel free to suggest ideas, LOL! Thanks so much for commenting, you're too kind.

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pheebs1 September 2 2006, 21:15:02 UTC

You're awesome, for your fine beta, and patience, and self, and everything. You rock. *HUGS*