Break Into a Thousand Pieces, PG13, Gen, Angst

[pheebs1]

(I wrote a wee something!)

With thanks to deirdre_c and mel_b_angel for encouraging my original kernel of an idea.

With *huge* thanks and much love to dotfic for thrashing this out with me, and providing a kick ass beta

Comments

[cutedevil666]

Aw Sammy- way to break my heart girl! But it was beautifully written & im so glad to be reading something from you! Very nicely done =)

[pheebs1]

Aw thank you so much, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. ;)

[oxoniensis]

Oh, so well done! And of course the thought of Dean would be his lifeline, no matter what is being done to him - even though Dean wasn't really in the story, you managed to show their relationship so well.

[pheebs1]

Thank you so much hon. I'm glad Dean was in the story ,while not being in the story (if that makes sense!). The comment is much appreciated.

[pinkphoenix1985]

great!

[pheebs1]

Thank you!

[vesuvianite]

An interesting piece. I liked that Sam, trapped in his unending dream, had it always being Dean coming to his rescue, even when he didn't know it *was* Dean.

I liked these lines, especially:

Sam. I don't know why you're seeing me. But it's your mind, figuring this out. Stopping yourself from... “

“I'm only in your head. I can be in your head anywhere.”

[pheebs1]

Thank you so much for picking out those lines as they were important ones for me. And I think Sam, even in his head, would know Dean would save him, if he could. Thank you for the lovely comment.

[coppering]

dang.

I don't comment enough on your writing, but seriously this one blew me away. SO heartbreaking.

I just hate sam without dean, and I hate that he could have almost everything and still be empty without his brother.

I love your writing style.

[pheebs1]

Thank you so so much! That is such a lovely comment, I appreciate it ;)