This is a great fic; an original idea, Snape is IC and the whole story is beautifully written. I'm enjoying it greatly. BTW a link to it appeared on a list of which I'm a member but the link did not work. I had to search LJ for your user name before I could find the fic. That may partly explain why there are so few comments on a such an entertaining story . Another Brit Pick - here: 'He was tan and wore nothing but a pair of...' a Britisher would say or write 'He was tanned and wore nothing but a pair of...'etc . We only use 'tan' in such a sentence as 'He had a dark tan' and never say 'he was (or will be or is) tan.'
There so much delicious in this section, even though I know it's just smutty fanservice.
The professor had made him promise to clean up after himself, and he didn’t dare risk disobeying. He cast the necessary charm and kissed it cheekily as he placed it in the drawer. Enjoy, Professor.
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BTW a link to it appeared on a list of which I'm a member but the link did not work. I had to search LJ for your user name before I could find the fic. That may partly explain why there are so few comments on a such an entertaining story .
Another Brit Pick - here: 'He was tan and wore nothing but a pair of...' a Britisher would say or write 'He was tanned and wore nothing but a pair of...'etc . We only use 'tan' in such a sentence as 'He had a dark tan' and never say 'he was (or will be or is) tan.'
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Thanks for the Britpicks - I couldn't find a proper Beta or Britpick so I finally ended up posting it as is. I'll make the appropriate changes.
I also put "bullocks" instead of "bollocks", which didn't quite get the same point across.
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There so much delicious in this section, even though I know it's just smutty fanservice.
The professor had made him promise to clean up after himself, and he didn’t dare risk disobeying. He cast the necessary charm and kissed it cheekily as he placed it in the drawer. Enjoy, Professor.
lol!
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