LOST fic

[phantomsangel]

My first LOST fic! It's been...OMG almost a year since I last wrote anything at all so this was certainly an exercise in getting the kinks out.

Title: Jacob Loves You
Rating: PG
Characters: Ben, Richard, Jacob, Locke

Comments

[madeline_may]

I actually just searched for a few minutes for the "Favorite" button, before remembering I wasn't on Youtube. *facepalm*

I've told you already what I thought, but I need to say it again - awesome. I could cry. You've made my heart ache, and that is a very good thing.

Love it, beautiful.

[phantomsangel]

You really are too kind. Thank you so much for reading (and leaving your lovely comment!).

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and though it sounds odd, I'm glad your heart aches. That's the feeling I was going for with this. :
)

[ada_bug]

Omg bb this is beautiful! I had tears in my eyes near the end there. Glorious. Poor, poor Ben. This is a sign that you should write more fic. The Island commands it. ;)

[madeline_may]

MADDY COMMANDS IT ALSO

Omg maybe

Maybe I AM THE ISLAND!

LOST

[ada_bug]

:O YOU JUST SOLVE LOST!

[phantomsangel]

Thank you so much, bb! <3 I'm so glad that you read and enjoyed it. I'm glad the sadness of this is coming across. Poor Ben. :(

[samn]

oh wow

idek what to say about this that was fantastic

[phantomsangel]

Thank you so much for reading!

[bluerosetorn]

Laura.

You've seriously moved me with this. Probably one of--if not THE--best LOST fic I've read.

"Amazing" doesn't begin to cover this.

[phantomsangel]

:')

Thank you so much. That's probably one of the nicest things anyone has said about my writing. :)

<3 ILU bb. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

[ilaydanur]

Oh wow, this was so good. I love it! Very well written. I feel so bad for Ben :(

[phantomsangel]

Thank you so much! I think Ben will turn out to be a tragic (but hopefully redeemed) figure of Lost.

Thank you for reading!

[ilaydanur]

I'm also hoping Ben will be able to redeem himself somehow, hopefully.

Oh, and I love the picture at the top of your journal!

[phantomsangel]

I hope he will too! I just hope he doesn't end up dead in the process. :/ He can't get much further down than where we left him, so let's hope he'll formulate that plan and start kicking some ass next season!

Thank you so much! I was so intrigued by the Foot scene with Ben/Jacob/Locke that I to make a header of it. :)