Fic: Code Red- Operation Patience

[phantomreviewer]

Title: Code Red- Operation Patience
Character: New Who UNIT, cameo mention of the Brig and the Doctor.
Pairing: Mace/Price
Rating: PG-13
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Comments

[anonymous]

So this is what all those emails turned into. Brilliant work as always. On the typo front it should be *were* instead of *where* however that was the only mistake I could see. Again good work
W

[phantomreviewer]

Um... it's over 5,000 words.

Which were?

Thanks!

[anonymous]

Where the Doctor's kind to you
W

[phantomreviewer]

I'll edit that then.

Ta

[nhj28]

Absolutely brilliant! To take two relative small characters and weave such a wonderful story out of them takes real skill. I loved it :-)

[phantomreviewer]

Didn't get as much Brig as I'd hoped in though.

But thanks!

[hellenebright]

O really excellent. I love this. You've made them into real people - more so than in the episodes, where they were a bit cardboardy for most of the time. Really, really good.

you haz got a stray apostrophe in among your privates though. Let me know if you want me to hunt it down and kill it :)

[phantomreviewer]

Thanks!

I just sorta, fell in love with their story and so had to give them a plot.

Please kill!

E-mail?

[hellenebright]

Email?

Have done.

They really deserve their own story.

[phantomreviewer]

Thanks.

And that's why I gave it them!

[phantomreviewer]

I've been made into someone's personal canon! Whoot!

I mean they are the cutest couple, Doctor/Rose Jack/Ianto move aside! :-)

It's the sort of thing that he would do, becuase flowers are just so... confusing.

I'm a bit bitter at the Doctor for his actions in these 2 eps. I mean if he hadn't turned up then they still would have saved the dya with the nuclears setting the sky alight.

He was going to be in it properly, but I just couldn't fit it in.

Oh well possible sequel!!!

Okay I'll change them, a little confused about 'Plus I think you missed space in "in front of"' Where?

But thanks for the positive review *and* the typo spotting

[phantomreviewer]

They are characters that are hardly seen, or even given proper characterisation, so any plot can work with the,.

Okay, I got the hint, I'll think about it. I just never 'clicked' with them. I might be able to do something with Kathy's grandson though...

And it's not like he hasn't used guns or blown things up. How else were they going to defeat the Sontarans. He used a weapon against them in the end, just becuase it wasn't a gun. He was an alien defending Earth with a weapon, which is *so* much better than humans doing. Clumsy useless apes who aren't to be trusted with guns...

No you're right. I'll change it.

[nightporters]

Like crowson's Fogle and Stiles these two characters deserve a whole series of their own *looks hopeful*

Great fic, love.

[phantomreviewer]

I'll think about it. I haven't even read the fics properly!

Thanks.

:-)