Comments | phantomizedacid: {one-shot} Don't sing that love song.

phantomizedacid

{one-shot} Don't sing that love song.

Aug 22, 2009 10:41

Don't sing that love song.
→ Jonghyun/Key; PG-16
He doesn't want to hear their voices.
for miximel because i hope this will cheer her up

( “That’s our love song.” )

!fanfic, !oneshot, p: jonghyun/key

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miximel August 22 2009, 03:16:29 UTC

I HATE YOU

miximel August 22 2009, 03:16:35 UTC

OMG READING

miximel August 22 2009, 03:30:19 UTC

OMG GIRL. AMAZING. I LOVED IT ALL, BUT JFC

Jonghyun sits up and crawls towards Kibum. “You don’t need any vocal ability to sing a love song with me.” He leans in. “In fact, we already have a love song.” Jonghyun plants soft kisses on Kibum’s neck. “Every night when we do this,” Jonghyun strokes Kibum’s crotch and softly presses against it, “and we make sounds like,” he emits sounds that can pass as moans, grunts, and groans into Kibum’s ear. “That’s our love song.”

THIS. this entire paragraph skdjfhglk it's perfect and hot and just so them (or how I'd like to think they are) and ffffff. I MISS YOU. :( I wish I could keysmash at you through twitter gah. COME BACK SOON. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

ILU LONG TIME. ♥

ontokki August 22 2009, 13:57:28 UTC

fasdflksad I'm so happy you like it ;__; And yes yes, definitely. That's so Jongkey dasdlihfsada I MISS YOU TOO TT-TT First thing when I get back is tweet you LOL♥♥♥ ILU2

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ontokki August 22 2009, 13:58:56 UTC

XD Key can be such a bitch

Thank you @_@'' This is what happens when I write fic while I'm sick.

lmao I always imagined Jjong a player~

xxsmiiles August 22 2009, 07:45:31 UTC

Another great JongKey fic XD lol, I thought it was going to get into some smut for a second *___* You captured Key very well :) He is clingy to Jjong, but in a good way~ The kid just needs a little reassurance, that's all, haha. Great job!

ontokki August 22 2009, 14:01:12 UTC

Lmao I didn't even expect that I'd write the ending like that. I surprised myself when it started getting smutty @_@' That's what I think is happening to Key now, maybe? XD Thank you♥

hp_groupie August 22 2009, 11:20:09 UTC

I want to hear that love song too! What's the deal!? -__-

lol, just playing. I love how this is written and the ending is just...idek. A little dirty...but not enough for everyone to see the stains...you know what I mean? LOL XD.

Keep it up. : )

ontokki August 22 2009, 14:06:19 UTC

lol I felt like I should've written smut, but I think that wouldn't be that fitting with the whole story. Just like you said, a lil dirty but no one can see the stains ;] Perfect words for what I was trying to convey~ Thank you♥