Better Men, Supernatural, NC-17, Broken!Verse

[phantisma]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Better Men
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Ellen, Bobby, Caleb, Pastor Jim, OMC, OFC
Rating: NC-17 (for thematic reasons)
Word Count: 3417

Summary: Broken!Verse, chapter 39 ( Click here for Index of all chaptersSummary: Dean tries to make up for his outburst, and it isn't exactly helpful. Sam gets his turn

Comments

[nyoka]

Damn girl, damn. I just discovered this fic, and can I just say I spent the last couple of days unable to sleep or eat because I could not leave this fic. Seriously. I had to read it all and could not stop until I caught up. Where do I even begin with the feedback??? This is an awesome piece of storytelling from start to finish. Some of the things that have stood out to me about this fic overall:
- Characterizations. You have an amazing way of giving voice and personality to not only the boys, but also your contributing characters like Bobby, Ellen, Caleb, as well as your OCs. I come away feeling so connected and able to comprehend their motivations, even with just a couple hundred words of dialogue...you really allow the reader to get inside their heads and to physically FEEL their pain and conflict. I want to add that I absolutely ADORE your hunters and the comraderie you have developed between them. They feel like a family, like a community, and I love the way they stand by John and the boys.
- Pacing. Every chapter leaves me on

[yakkorat_fics]

See, Amara? Characterization. Pacing. And psychology.

What did I tell you?

I swear, if it wasn't so contraversial they could use this piece in college creative writing courses.

You are amazing.

Love,
Julie-Rae

[ravensword]

Wow. First, let me say thank you for leaving such wonderful feedback. For taking the time to respond with such depth. I'm always floored when someone does.

Second, let me say thank you...your response to the story makes my heart happy...this story is very close to my heart. And I'd keep writing it if no one was reading it...but knowing that people are reading it...and getting it and loving it? That makes my evil little self happy!
I

[nuffeenmuffeen]

Oh! You got me again! Sam's pain! Yet still giving to Dean!

And Pastor Jim. You have breathed life into all these characters.

Another fabulous chapter.

Thanks.

[ravensword]

Thank you!

Sam...and Dean...gods...

[ravensword]

Thanks!

[zenamydog]

Awesome chapter, love the Sam/Dean interaction as always.

Back into the swing of things, looking forward to more.

[ravensword]

Thanks!

More to come...

[winchester_brat]

Awww... Poor Sammy... Poor Dean. Wow, I never knew Gabe had that in him. What a man...

[ravensword]

*smooshes my boys*

Gabe is so turning into one of my favorite OC of all time.