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jadedblue December 11 2006, 07:47:09 UTC
Ohhhh.... this story is kiling me. You know just which string s to pull and when! morbidly beautiful.

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ravensword December 11 2006, 12:04:58 UTC
Thank you!

I'm glad you're reading!

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jakesdream December 11 2006, 08:01:02 UTC
I love that you wrote John's POV. I like looking at things from the way he sees them. I feel very sorry for him that he has such regret about what he did to his boys. I can see that he only wanted to do the right thing. I feel so bad for saying how hot it is that Dean gets pleasure from cutting himself (sexually that is) John doesn't know what he did to Dean, when he finds out how is he going to be? Love this so much and can't wait for more :) Excellent work JD

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ravensword December 11 2006, 12:08:25 UTC
John is not going to handle it any better than Dean, I'm afraid. They really are two different people than they were when it happened.

But I also think, as twisted and fucked up as it was, it serves as a way that John can make Dean really understand how much he loves him.

Glad you're liking!

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apieceofcake December 11 2006, 10:02:22 UTC
>> Sam nodded and climbed out, leaving John alone, with little to do but follow the address Dean had given him, and save the little girl…maybe the boy too…at least he seemed more qualified to do that than to save his own family.

*Is sad for him * Nice to see the scene from John's side, thanks :-)

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ravensword December 11 2006, 12:09:11 UTC
*pets John*

Poor man. He really is hurting.

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idiot4dean December 11 2006, 10:44:29 UTC
Ah! A chapter from John's POV. It's nice to see how confused and lost this is making him feel, Dean's been feeling that way for a long time.

Looking forward to how Dean copes with being with his family and the memories of the past.

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ravensword December 11 2006, 12:10:29 UTC
Yes, it is nice to see things from John's perspective, and yes, he's lost and confused and not sure what to do to help, now that the action part is over.

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percysowner December 11 2006, 12:35:06 UTC
I love the Jon POV. And I'm so glad he reminded Sam that some of what Sam did this time may well have been influenced by Dean's deal with the demon. I've always thought that that was probably a big part of Sam's reactions. Thanks for the update.

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ravensword December 12 2006, 04:27:05 UTC
Yeah...demons are sneaky bastards! They may live up to the letter of their agreement...but they'll get you in the end.

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