Comments | phantisma: Home, Keeper!Verse Supernatual, NC-17

phantisma

Home, Keeper!Verse Supernatual, NC-17

Nov 06, 2006 13:27

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Home, A follow on to "My Brother's Keeper" (Part Twenty (with links to all parts) HereCharacters/Pairing: Sam/Dean ( Read more... )

supernatural, supernatural:gseries:1:amara_m, keeper!verse

Comments 19

plutogirl10 November 7 2006, 05:45:43 UTC

1. Dana is just the cutest thing and I want to eat. her. up

2. I love how you appreciate that the Sam/John relationship is still awkward and strange to Sam, instead of merely glossing over the hard bits.

3. Aww! *flails* Dean! *flappy hands* Sam! *coos* such heart-breakingly sweet sexing *melts all over the place*

ravensword November 7 2006, 05:54:02 UTC

1. Dana and DanaandSam...too much! I've always thought Dean with kids was priceless...but this?

2. Awkward...very...Sam just doesn't know what to do with John...and John...well...he's pretty lost himself.

3. That's actually what the whole piece was about...but the other stuff found its way in too.

rei_c November 7 2006, 12:58:53 UTC

It's like Christmas! For Hunters!

I'm sorry I don't have more concrete feedback. This just made me smile. It was so perfect. *Hugs*

ravensword November 7 2006, 14:34:51 UTC

Thank you!

It was actually meant to be Thanksgiving for Hunters...but that never seemed to make it into the story. LOL.

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ravensword November 7 2006, 14:35:29 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad!

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ravensword November 8 2006, 03:44:06 UTC

*huggles*

dividedloyalty November 8 2006, 00:22:08 UTC

I was just so damn happy to see a new piece to the keeper's verse :D

I still love this Sam so very much!! I can taste how awkward this whole thing still feels to him, and how hard he's trying. I just love him.

Sam and Dana is just GUH!

Sam giving Dean power in sex was just ... I can't seem to find a word to say how great the whole scene was. Oh wait. Great is pretty accurate. :)
Sam’s head was tossing against the pillow, one hand still gripping the headboard, the other wrapped around Dean’s bicep.
I mean... come on!!! *dies dead*

I hope you still have more to tell from this verse. With the information Sam gave away and Dean, and Sam and Dana and you and Sam. I just hope you want to tell more :)

Thanks a lot!
lina.

ravensword November 8 2006, 02:37:08 UTC

I'm pretty happy with this Sam too.

Sam and Dean it together makes me happy.

I'm glad you liked it. And don't worry, there will be more.