Comments | phantisma: Ages - 12, Supernatural, Gen

phantisma

Ages - 12, Supernatural, Gen

Oct 12, 2006 17:54

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Ages - 12
Characters/Pairing: Dean, Sam, some mention of John, Original Characters
Rating: PG-ish
Word Count: 5353
For 100_situations, Table 2 Prompt: 057 Fever ( Read more... )

dark fic, fandom: supernatural, angst, character: dean, character: sam, series: ages

Comments 18

batina35 October 13 2006, 01:52:35 UTC

Wow this was really well done and really really really sad. I almost made it without shedding a tear. Almost. When Dean had to admit to his foster parents that he didn't find his Dad when he went looking for him, that was so freaking sad. Good job. I'm looking forward to reading more!

ravensword October 13 2006, 14:09:19 UTC

Thank you. I was...concerned, because I've never tackled the boys at a younger age, and it's been a long time since I was 12...but I was, like I imagine Dean to be, too mature for the age, too used to having to do stuff for myself and used to looking out for my baby brother...

This series will not move as quickly as the previous ones, the pieces are going to be longer for one...and somehow they're more ouchy.

I have some of the ages mapped out already though...

gillianinoz October 13 2006, 09:42:12 UTC

Yeah, I like this so far - it's an interesting idea - and one I've thought about a lot. What if John went away and didn't come back, when they were still kids.

At least he left them a note - so he's not dead somewhere.

And I like that the boys are somewhere nice, with decent people. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

ravensword October 13 2006, 14:12:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this.

I haven't really decided if this is going to go in a linear fashion, particularly because the ending of the story is where my brain started the whole thing, and that bit is pushing to get written...but...yeah, it's going to get interesting.

Thanks for reading.

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ravensword October 13 2006, 21:25:55 UTC

I'm all owie over the next piece, and it probably won't go up until tomorrow sometime.

I'm glad you liked it though!

apieceofcake October 13 2006, 21:01:39 UTC

Ah..poor boys :-( Look forward to the next part, thanks :-)

ravensword October 13 2006, 21:27:09 UTC

Thank you for reading.

I hope to have the next piece up tomorrow.

catling42 October 13 2006, 23:47:45 UTC

oh owwww. poor boys. very well done... I totally got all sniffly when Dean had to tell the foster parents where he'd been because he'd just promised honesty, and it's Dean and promise. *sigh* Oh, Dean.

ravensword October 14 2006, 01:57:20 UTC

It seems odd to say thank you for feeling the "ow"...but that's what I mean. It was meant to sting.

It'll sting more. I promise.

catling42 October 14 2006, 02:22:53 UTC

good. I like it when it hurts. heh.

Also, I was reading through the other comments and I noticed you were worried about their behaviour being age-appropriate... I think you've got them down pretty well, and I work with kids.

ravensword October 14 2006, 02:35:33 UTC

Yeah, I like it when it hurts too. LOL.

And thank you...its good to know.