Out to the Black, Firefly, PG-13

[phantisma]

Fandom: Firefly

Comments

[havenward]

:purrrrrrrrrrs:

You always have the best words, boss...

[ravensword]

*huggles you*

Thanks, 'Nabler.

[cyphersushi]

*adores* I love your River. I reckon she'd be just like that when a bit grown up and a bit more in her head. Excellent work!

[ravensword]

Thank you!

[elebridith]

Wonderful! Feels like a future episode, could see everything before me, could hear the voices... wow.

[ravensword]

That's a big compliment! Thank you!

[rivestra]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MY WONDERFUL STORY!

::clutches poor Mal and kick-ass River to chest::

::stares at them petulantly while nursing massive bruises incurred by not letting go fast enough when River asked::

I finally had a free minute and read this again (such a hardship!). I know I already told you how much I loved it in IM, but you rock, and that can't be said enough.

Some of my favoritest bits:

The way River responds to what she reads from Mal as fluidly as she does to what he says. It's a logical evolution for her with those she trusts, and I love seeing her all grown into it. I also love that she still trusts Mal.

"Thunder crashed through the sky, rumbling under his feet as the big fat drops turned to cold lashes of rain..." made me feel like I was there, standing in the rain with Mal.

Hope. How much do I love River trying on sentimentality for Mal? Rather a lot, I tell you.

Mal"...squinting at the blankets and pillows and the clean everywhere to begin to remember where he was." Sorry, but something about him thinking

[ravensword]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it, because I was really uncertain of it and couldn't wrestle it into submission!

[katbcoll]

Ohhhhhh shiny!

Ohhh so much fun! Love it! I love how River will always get her way with him.

[ravensword]

Yes, she probably will!

Thanks!