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cyphersushi July 12 2009, 11:46:18 UTC
Oooh! So well crafted. I really like it.

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gigerisgod July 14 2009, 00:03:05 UTC
really interesting scenario you've created here, the sexual virtual reality game gone all wrong. it would be especially interesting to see this written from Daniel's pov.

the bondage is very descriptive, which i liked. Daniel's emotional shift once he surfaces from the program and realizes what's taken place was nice.

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sidlj July 15 2009, 02:58:47 UTC
Yes! Cam needs to go through all the usual SG-1 tropes, and this slave!fic does a great job of making him one of the gang. *g* I was able to hear his voice and Daniel's throughout, so nice job!

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