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jakesdream September 8 2006, 04:10:57 UTC
"Right here Dean pressed his lips to Sam’s and they melted into one, mind, body, pain, joy…a second orgasm…the night sky faded and nothing in the world existed but this…"

OMG that is so beautiful. You ended this perfectly, I couldn't imagine a better ending. So tender and full of love, GAWD you just nailed this. I loved all the aspects of this whole story, love/angst/comfort/hurt/torture. You did it all and fabulously :) Thank you so much for the time you put into this and I hope by saying "thank you" it conveys my pure and utter joy and happiness that this story has made me :) *huge grin and big huggles to you :)* JD

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ravensword September 8 2006, 11:20:20 UTC
Thank you, sincerely. Your feedback has meant a lot to me.

I'm glad the ending was satisfying. I sometimes feel that endings are my weak points, so I'm glad this worked!

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ravensword September 8 2006, 11:22:45 UTC
Thank you.

I think the idea is pretty freaking hot too...and yes, maybe I can explore it more in the future.

Right now I'm enjoying re-watching the first season on DVD, and plotting out a few fics for other fandoms...but, I've invested a lot in this 'verse...so I can see where something more might come 'round later.

Thank you for reading and commenting, and complimenting. It means a lot!

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culturegeek76 September 8 2006, 07:10:06 UTC
Phew. It was such a dark story, and so full of violence and angst yet you were able to pull it together in a way that the connection of the family destroyed the bad guy was believable (as far as I can bend my mind around the supernatural, that is).
And then you were able to tie it all together with a peaceful ending that was happy and good and not sappy or overdone.
Yay yay yay.
*spirit fingers*
Loved this.

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ravensword September 8 2006, 11:24:31 UTC
Yay! I'm glad the ending didn't come across as overdone. I was aiming at healing, sexy, peaceful...but often veer off into the landy of way overdone.

I'm glad it was believable too! That makes me very happy!

Thank you!

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zenamydog September 8 2006, 09:11:34 UTC
OHHHHHHH i didnt realize that chapter 5 was also up, god, you did this with such amazing sensativity. If i had the right, i would say that i am proud of you. Thank you! *squeals at the loss of this fic*

UMMM LOL ?? Any chance of a sequel????? *flutters eyes at you*

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ravensword September 8 2006, 11:27:42 UTC
LOL...thank you so much!

There are three compliments that I think are pretty damn awesome:

1) Turning someone new onto a fandom they've never watched before
2) Multiple Reads and Spontaneous recommendations to friends
3) Asking for more.

You aren't the first to ask for more. There may be more...but it may take a while...I've got a few fics for a few other fandoms to concentrate on.

Thank you for reading and for your blush-making compliments!

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plutogirl10 September 8 2006, 12:35:23 UTC
okay, I loved<\i> this last chapter. It wasn't overdone, it was just . . . right, and it brought the entire fic to a close beautifully. and yes, cuddly dean/sam is in order. Whew!

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ravensword September 8 2006, 14:05:23 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I wanted warm to end with...since the rest of it was so cold and dark.

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