Comments | phantisma: The Impala, Supernatural, PG-13, Broken!Verse

phantisma

The Impala, Supernatural, PG-13, Broken!Verse

Jun 18, 2007 18:49

Fandom: Supernatural, Broken!Verse
Title: The Impala
Characters/Pairings: Sam, the Impala, Bobby
Rating: PG-13 (for overall theme)
Word Count: 1432
Summary: Pre-Broken (All parts of Broken are here. Sam goes to get the Impala at Bobby's.

A/Ns & Warnings: Heavy, serious angst and guilt.

( He’d been in the Impala last when Dean dropped him off at the train station in LA. They had never said goodbye. They hadn’t said much at all. )

supernatural, sam, slave!dean

Comments 48

jakesdream June 19 2007, 02:48:14 UTC

“Take me to him, girl.”

Awwwww, this was heart breaky :) Love this little back story, makes so much sense in the end...Thanks so very much ;) JD

ravensword June 19 2007, 03:52:23 UTC

Thanks for reading!

And yes, heart breaky.

itsthedetails June 19 2007, 03:03:49 UTC

Oh wow, Sam's intense reaction to the Impala was so strong I could practically smell the Old Spice, the worn leather and all the things Sam smells that remind him of the Impala a Dean.

ravensword June 19 2007, 03:54:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that came through.

livsnddark June 19 2007, 03:14:21 UTC

That was beautiful. Powerful heart-renchingly beautiful.

ravensword June 19 2007, 03:54:51 UTC

Thank you!

calijirl5150 June 19 2007, 03:51:08 UTC

You write so elogently. My fave part has got to be the last paragraph, just beautiful.

ravensword June 19 2007, 03:55:20 UTC

Thank you!

anonymous June 19 2007, 03:51:38 UTC

Honestly with the kind of job they do, that's one thing I really had a hard time understanding and forgiving in Sam's character initially was losing contact with his brother, who loved him, had given everything for him, and could die any night. I think I'm okay with it now only because Sam's grown up and the selfish, hey the world's all about my wants and feelings and since it's all about me nothing bad could happen to the people I love, thing died off a while ago and now, more than ever, he's probably regretting every damn bit of the time he lost with his family. He's lucky, it could've happened just like this instead, with never a chance to grow up and make it right.

ravensword June 19 2007, 03:56:15 UTC

Yeah,...Sam has a bit of a selfish streak...especially pre-series Sam.

It's nice to see it burn away as he matures.