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[phaelas]

Title: Make The Move (part 1

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[sorrynow]

I really loved this. Since I'm feeling pretty crappy right now, I kinda died when I read: "There was a silence. "Shit... Mat..."

At first, Mat thought that was good. Then Jonny was rolling away from him.
Jonny's voice was really thin. "I'm... I'm gonna throw up..."
Mat's eyes grew big as he pulled Jonny up. "Jon, no. Not here, not on my..."

For some reason, I just got the best image of Mat's eyes getting huge and then Jonny just throwing up somewhere on/around Mat.
I can't wait to see the next part of this<3

[phaelas]

I laughed SO hard while writing that bit, though I was sort of fearing that I'd be the only one to find this hilarious. Poor Mat. *giggles*

Thank you. :D

[phaelas]

Yeah it IS sort of a cliffhanger, isn't it? *g* Fine, FINE. I'll really try to get it written. XD

(I decided to be merciful and put him in a bar where they have Jameson. I can only torture the poor boy so much. :P)

[imjustdifrent]

Aww... I love the band baby. I said about the same to my mom last night, so reading that was just icing on the cake. I was kind of afraid you were going to jump right into the sex and screw up the whole story, but kudos to you for making him vomit and leaving us with a really hot, but kind of gross, totally believable cliffhanger.

And I absolutely love that right after he posts in his blog about all of the legal age consents for sex in various states, you mention him letting 17-year-olds suck him off. Coincidence? Methinks not. ;)

[phaelas]

Well you know, it would've come down to the spectacular sex scene of Jonny's cock doing not much more than twitching and Mat unable to resist the idea of jerking off on Jonny's body. XD Might've been interesting too...? I just wanted to be evil to Mat.

Bwhahaha. My "own" Mat has had younger than that in states where it's definitely illegal. But he's ollllder and wiser now, I guess. *g*

[imjustdifrent]

I like that you were evil to Mat. It made this so much more fun to read. XD

As for him having "definitely illegal" sex, that's just creepy. I'm happy Mat is wiser, because while I might let sixteen slide, any younger is too pedophilic for my tastes. (The fourteen-year-olds can fantasize all they want, but please don't let it happen.)

[phaelas]

I know right? Hahahahaha. It was the whole point, anyway.

Yeah, no, sixteen was the lowest Mat would go. No worries. He's not fucking children.

[killhannahx3]

Damn, i went to post and my internet cable came unplugged...

uh, basically: please post more...?(:

[phaelas]

Keep on hoping I will find the inspiration and the time. XD I will try my best! :)