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Apr 19, 2008 10:00

Title: The suite (chapter 8/11)
Author: Las
Pairings: Jonne/Kristian, Jonne/?
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jonne pays a lonely visit to a hotel in a fairytale setting - Kristian the bored hotel employee finds himself intruiged.
Warnings: Very much AU, explicit het, explicit slash, voyeurism.... and cuteness. :P
Betas: inside_the_veil. Kiitos love! <3


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nerak_rose April 19 2008, 08:27:55 UTC
awww that was kinda sad.

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phaelas April 20 2008, 07:10:52 UTC
*pets* They'll all get over it, promise.

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nerak_rose April 20 2008, 07:58:26 UTC
sure they will. i just thought it was kinda sad.

but anyway. what i should be saying is something smart about your awesome writing skillz and whatnot, but my brain is not functioning properly.. since tuesday, hah.

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nerak_rose April 20 2008, 07:59:21 UTC
yes, that was the brainy me who forgot to log in. :P

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deadly_innocent April 19 2008, 08:40:26 UTC
aww, nice, but I feel sorry for poor rejected Kristian.
And Jonne seems not to be so happy, though...
Hope they will be okay after all...

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phaelas April 20 2008, 07:13:24 UTC
Jonne is happy, believe me. *nods* Though I figure that he's gonna have a serious talk with his lover about staying away so long. His lover keeps asking to come along already... but Jonne doesn't want to. So you know, he does it to himself, partly.

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jayce47 April 19 2008, 15:49:47 UTC
awww that was sweet but sad bless them and who is *The Boyfriend* ?

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phaelas April 20 2008, 07:11:44 UTC
I'm not gonna tell youuuuuu. :D

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jonne_bunny April 20 2008, 02:20:21 UTC
First thank you for updating. I needed this after a long day. Great as always.
Second I agree with Nerakrose its really sad. I hope this mystery man is worth it.

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phaelas April 20 2008, 07:10:03 UTC
Always glad to make you happy. ;)

Yeah he's worth it, take my word on it. I find it rather amusing that everyone thinks it's so sad. It's not sad. Is it? Perhaps I'm just an emotionless bastard or something, but I never felt sad for anyone while writing this story. XD

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nerak_rose April 20 2008, 08:04:02 UTC
i didn't feel sad for jonne but for kristian. :P but then again we don't knows how it goes oh noes!

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phaelas April 20 2008, 09:52:28 UTC
Kristian is just sulky cause he didn't get to fuck Jonne into the bed. :D Poor man.

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