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Fic: The Rescue Blues | AI8 | Kris/Adam | Adult | 2/2

Aug 01, 2009 12:43

The Rescue Blues
part 2, continued from here.

( Singing's like a shitty boyfriend. The sex is still amazing when you get it, but he leaves his dirty underwear on the bathroom floor and only calls when everyone else he knows is too busy to hang out. Then he leaves you for someone younger and prettier and thinner and you just don't have the heart to keep trying. )

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adictd2life August 1 2009, 18:44:46 UTC

lol. I loved it!

phaballa August 1 2009, 19:24:54 UTC

Thanks!

onthehillside August 1 2009, 18:52:43 UTC

Ahhh, I have jazz hands over this. It's sweet and achy and it falls into place very nicely! And the ending! I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. Excellent work.

phaballa August 1 2009, 19:26:02 UTC

Hee, thanks! The ending just kind of happened. Totally didn't plan for that but... it works :P

butterfly August 1 2009, 19:58:29 UTC

Oh, the two of them meeting! And the falling in love! And BRAD! I loved what you did with Brad. And then the universe locks them back into place, only they're doing it together. And your Kris is so... mostly mellow and taking life as it comes, even when he has amnesia. That's so Kris. And I love wasted Kris lecturing Adam on not wasting his talent.

♥

I really enjoyed this story.

phaballa August 1 2009, 20:17:06 UTC

Thank you!! Yeah, you know, the universe has *plans* and it's not going to let a little amnesia get in the way :P

miss_begonia August 1 2009, 20:06:20 UTC

"Singing's like a shitty boyfriend," Adam says. "The sex is still amazing when you get it, but he leaves his dirty underwear on the bathroom floor and only calls when everyone else he knows is too busy to hang out. Then he leaves you for someone younger and prettier and thinner and you just don't have the heart to keep trying."

I know I didn't mention this specifically but this is one of my favorite parts of what you added. It's so completely in Adam's voice, and yet it's so WISE, and it fits perfectly with everything.

I &hearts this story.

phaballa August 1 2009, 20:20:26 UTC

I ♥ you :)

Your advice was really invaluable. I think that extra scene really connected all the pieces of the story, and this is why betas are AWESOME especially when they speak the truth!

miss_begonia August 2 2009, 09:19:24 UTC

Awwww. I'm happy I was able to help! This was such an awesome story to begin with, so I'm glad I could contribute to making it awesome-er. &hearts

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phaballa August 1 2009, 20:20:43 UTC

Thanks :)