Fic: Wizard Not Included | American Idol RPF | Adult

[phaballa]

Wizard Not Included

Fandom: American Idol RPF
Pairing: Adam/Brad, Adam/Kris
Rating: Adult
Comments: With many thanks to madame_d, who made this a million times better, and to musicboxgirl and llamabitchyo for telling me it doesn't suck.

Warnings: Recreational drug use.

Summary: Adam felt so weird and crazy that it couldn't be anything but full-on, true and for serious love.

Comments

[phaballa]

I'm convinced that Kris senses our need for Adam to get hugs, and so he's really just providing a much-needed service to the world :P

Thank you!! I love dialog, I get into a little TOO much sometimes, but it's so much fun to write.

[lferion]

This is *brilliant*

I love the way you interweave theh past and the present, the two strands complementing and talking to each other.

And I really, really like the way you end it, with two ends that are also beginnings.

*Saves to delicious list*

[phaballa]

Thank you! Yeah, that's definitely what I was going for--the parallels of past-present and all that. How people sort of come into themselves is always really cool to me and I just wanted to explore that.

[zoniduck]

This was amazing! I think you did an awesome job with everyone's voices. Thank you so much for sharing it!

[phaballa]

Thank you for reading!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Voice is hard sometimes when I haven't written the characters a lot, so that's good to hear.

[demotu]

I love philosophical fic, just love it, especially when it really gets to the heart of the characters like this one. The nonlinear dimensions of the story just highlight Adam's journey, all the backstory with Brad and the subtle undertones that blossom at the end with Kris. I love Kris always, but even more in this! The Amelie references were just fabulous, and you really captured Adam and his quirks for me.

[phaballa]

Thanks!! I was a little worried about all the pop culture references so I'm really glad that worked for you. Amelie is such an awesome movie, I just feel sad for anyone who hasn't seen it :P

[ja]

gorgeous.

[phaballa]

Thank you!