Fic: Southland Tales (The More Things Change) | cw rps | chicagoland | j2 | adult

Nov 26, 2008 16:26

Southland Tales (The More Things Change)

Fandom: CW RPS
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Rating: Adultish
Warning: Extreme schmoopiness ahead!

Comments: A sort of sequel/epilogue to Chicagoland, which I wrote for spn_j2_bigbang about ten million years ago. As requested by madame_d for her birthday: Jared and Jensen decide to have another baby. Four sort of-connected vignettes ( Read more... )

chicagoland, rps, project mayhem, fic

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wuzzlybear November 26 2008, 23:06:58 UTC
HOLY CRAP ON A CRACKER!
ALDJA'ODJR9UWQ9EHRIZXFJNKFHJ9304HR3IJRSKFJND!
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
*high pitched squealing noise*

This is so PERFECT

And the last two paragraphs?! *more squealy noises*

SO AWESOME!
thankyou!

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phaballa November 27 2008, 01:48:02 UTC
Awww! Thank you for reading! I'm glad I found the voice for this story. I definitely needed to take a little Chicagoland vacation and it seems like y'all wanted one, too :)

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green_postit November 26 2008, 23:11:00 UTC
I still love this story more than words <3

You're a bloody incredible writer, A. Fucking fantastic story.

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phaballa November 27 2008, 01:48:30 UTC
Thank you!! I don't know about incredible, but I do love these characters :)

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benitle November 26 2008, 23:16:09 UTC
This post, this fic makes me so happy that I'm nearly crying happy tears. You have no idea how badly I've been longing for this. And here it is. Gorgeous and funny and sweet and a little sad/nostalgic too. This is more wonderful than anything I could have hoped for.

Seriously, Chicagoland is one of my all time favorite fics ever and seeing this makes me so, so happy.

I loved the schmoopy bits, the funny bits, the little annoyances between two long-time lovers, Jensen's irritation with Jared's habits, how they work together, the love. The circle how it closes.

So much love! My words are failing me. Thank you for this. Thank you so much! ♥

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phaballa November 27 2008, 01:51:18 UTC
*hearts* Chicagoland is probably my favorite thing I've written so we are in agreement :P Thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it! I think this little universe kind of has a life of its own and I am a bit leery about writing more because I want people to be able to imagine what happens for themselves but... when someone asks for it for their birthday, I have to deliver :)

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benitle November 30 2008, 15:09:15 UTC
Just wanted to let you know that Chicagoland and this wonderful piece has been recced here. :D

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phaballa November 30 2008, 17:25:16 UTC
Thank you :)

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popmusicjunkie November 26 2008, 23:50:22 UTC
OMG YAY!

You have no idea how gidddy and happy it made me to see this fic on my flist.

And now having read it, I am even happier and more giddy. ♥

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phaballa November 27 2008, 01:52:04 UTC
YAY! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) It was actually pretty fun to write! As long as everyone has a good time, I always say :P

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I heart you! madame_d November 27 2008, 00:43:17 UTC
*sniffles and babbles incoherently* This is wonderful and perfect and all I ever wanted! *flails*

*clings to fic* Please don't end, please don't eeeeeeeend...

I... and it... and *flaps* It's perfect and warm and loving and real, because yes, "some days, they don't come easy, and some days, they don't come hard," and just... *sniffles some more* It's about them, the entire family, and they make me squishingly happy and, clearly, reduce me to a blabbering mess.

This is the bestest birthday present EVER. *snuggles fic* I'm never letting go.

Which is why he's pretty surprised when Jared says, "I wanna have a baby." Also because Jared's dick is in his ass at the time, and it's really not the appropriate venue for this discussion. Really really not.

JENSEN! ♥ x billionty!

and Lizzie giggles behind her, says, "I think it's sweet. Ms. Hatfield at school says that most married people stop having sex after the first five years and like, a healthy sex life is totally indicative of a healthy relationship and stuff. So I think that-"Ms ( ... )

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Re: I heart you! phaballa November 27 2008, 01:55:27 UTC
Phew. I'm so glad I wrote more. I almost stopped after the first part but then Wendy said MAKE IT LONGER so I decided to do something else.

They did raise some awesome kids!! Because THEY are awesome and they really would be the best, coolest dads ever. Is it wrong that I wish they were MY dads? Um, especially since Jared is younger than me? Yeah, it's probably wrong. But that's the beauty of the Magic Line. I can want Chicagoland J2 to be my dads, and not worry about what real J2 are up to.

...this makes me think someone should write a 'My Two Dads' AU. Jensen would be the Paul Riser dad! And Jared would be the other one! AHAHA. It would be awesome.

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Re: I heart you! madame_d November 27 2008, 03:07:38 UTC
...this makes me think someone should write a 'My Two Dads' AU. Jensen would be the Paul Riser dad! And Jared would be the other one! AHAHA. It would be awesome.

*goes with predictable reaction* Yup. YOU definitely should. ;)

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Re: I heart you! phaballa November 27 2008, 03:59:49 UTC
But who would the girl be?? I actually don't even remember the premise of My Two Dads except that they were supposedly two straight guys raising a teenage girl for... some reason I can't remember. And they maybe lived above some kind of soda shop in an awesome loft?

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