I have to start out with the fact that this wasn't exactly how I expected the fic to go. Like, I don't know, I sort of expected after James calls Jensen the first time that their would be a huge big argument and concessions on both sides before some make-up sex that proved how much Jared and Jensen are like, each others one true love, or something.
Instead, what you wrote, was better than that. More adult, more domestic, and had a more genuine feel throughout the whole thing. My love for it was slow and steady and by the end, and I say this for very few fics, I feel like I could read it over and over again.
One real high point, and this probably makes me a geek that watches to much TV or something was:
"Charlie and Lola is Charlie's favorite, of course it is. "Why is it your favorite?" Jared asks her after the first episode. The episodes are short, only seven or ten minutes long, usually. "What makes it so good
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Thank you SO MUCH! I, yes, I ADORE Charlie and Lola. My friend Jacob used to nanny for his god daughter and we'd watch dvr'd episodes of Charlie and Lola for fun. It's such an amazing show, I could watch it forever!!
And also, thank you for thinking I'm mature :P I tried really hard to make it more... not a fic ABOUT something specific, some specific event, but more... how real life might go. So I'm really happy that worked even better for you than if it had gone the typical J2 ficcy route.
I liked this a lot. I like the domesticity...and how there was not giant climax, it was like looking into two peoples lives. Their normal lives, and I reallylike that. I kept waiting for something devestating to happen and it didnt and im glad for that.
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I have to start out with the fact that this wasn't exactly how I expected the fic to go. Like, I don't know, I sort of expected after James calls Jensen the first time that their would be a huge big argument and concessions on both sides before some make-up sex that proved how much Jared and Jensen are like, each others one true love, or something.
Instead, what you wrote, was better than that. More adult, more domestic, and had a more genuine feel throughout the whole thing. My love for it was slow and steady and by the end, and I say this for very few fics, I feel like I could read it over and over again.
One real high point, and this probably makes me a geek that watches to much TV or something was:
"Charlie and Lola is Charlie's favorite, of course it is. "Why is it your favorite?" Jared asks her after the first episode. The episodes are short, only seven or ten minutes long, usually. "What makes it so good ( ... )
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And also, thank you for thinking I'm mature :P I tried really hard to make it more... not a fic ABOUT something specific, some specific event, but more... how real life might go. So I'm really happy that worked even better for you than if it had gone the typical J2 ficcy route.
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And set in my Chi-town, too! Did I mention the wow? Cause yeah.
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And also, thank you. *draws hearts* They make it so easy to write them :)
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Fantastic
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