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courtberger July 16 2007, 01:02:20 UTC
You posted!!!! I love it! :)

Court

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pfyre July 16 2007, 13:22:35 UTC
oh definitely posted :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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courtberger July 16 2007, 23:19:11 UTC
So, so, so good! *Squee!*

Court

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jackfan2 July 16 2007, 13:26:11 UTC
I adored it the first time I read it (as a tester) and adored it again!

Yea, I really wish the writers would give John a stronger, more physical and psychological link to Atlantis and the ancient technology. It would really add a new amount of depth to the show.

Anyroad, great story and the premise is fantastic!

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pfyre July 16 2007, 13:40:39 UTC
thank you thank you for your kind words both for the completed fic and for the encouragement when it was WIP

glad you enjoyed it and the second segment is in the works!

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wildcat88 July 16 2007, 15:02:39 UTC
What a fabulous start. Great characterization and wonderful detail.

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pfyre July 16 2007, 16:37:20 UTC
thank you for your kind words and the muse is just loving John Sheppard and all of this :D

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