Comments | pforte: Fic: Bad Moon Rising (part two)

pforte

Fic: Bad Moon Rising (part two)

Nov 25, 2009 20:32

Story: Bad Moon Rising
Fandom: Star Trek reboot
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jim hadn’t known and he most definitely hadn’t suspected. Now that he thought of it, there had been signs. Lots of them. But hindsight is twenty-twenty and, honestly, how could he have guessed this? His best friend of two years, a fucking fairy tale monster ( Read more... )

kirk/mccoy, star trek

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darkblueglitter November 26 2009, 02:23:44 UTC

I really liked this! The idea of Bones as a werewolf was interesting and I think you pulled it off very well!

pforte November 26 2009, 06:57:07 UTC

Thank you!

fallingcinders November 26 2009, 02:38:59 UTC

This was awesomely awesome, your assessment was correct. Bones as a werewolf is just... unf unf, can do no wrong by me, it seems.

Loved how they were finally able to reach an understanding regarding their bonding "ordeal" and how it still manages to leave an open end for more between them.

(Also, I'm super curious about Jocelyn and McCoy and how their relationship fell apart when she found out he was hiding his secret from her, if you ever decide to explore that angle~)

fallingcinders November 26 2009, 06:04:14 UTC

Umm, I'm really awful about critiquing anything, but some parts of the end did feel a bit rushed. (For me, it was namely the Narada scene/incident.)

Still, I thoroughly enjoyed the story (read it twice, in fact... ;) )and I rally love all of your K/Mc stories so I would never complain for more from you.

pforte November 26 2009, 07:00:04 UTC

Thanks for letting me know. I see what you mean, now that you write it. Writing it felt different because I wrote forever on the ending. *lol*

fallingcinders November 26 2009, 19:45:30 UTC

Honestly, the story was still fantastic even if the Narada "recap" felt a bit rougher than the rest of the text. ;)

(Heeey, i noticed this wasn't x-posted over at kirk_mccoy and st_reboot~)

irish_dragon November 26 2009, 04:53:16 UTC

It's a wonderful story, but I think the ending was a bit quick.

pforte November 26 2009, 07:08:10 UTC

Uh-oh, the second time someone mentions it. O_O

Seriously though, tanks for telling me, I know it's hard to leave criticism. I see where you're coming from and I have no excuses, only that, when I wrote it, it felt right to end it without another sex scene/shouty talk/angsty inner monologue. Which obviously didn't work out so well.

adafrog November 27 2009, 02:40:18 UTC

Cool, thanks.

blue_druid November 27 2009, 05:01:03 UTC

I enjoyed this. :D

The ending worked well for me. You finished it when everything that needed to be said, was. It felt right.

I would enthusiastically read more in this AU.

eumelkeks November 27 2009, 09:00:03 UTC

Oh wheeee, you read it! I COERCED ONE PERSON ON MY FLIST INTO READING THIS! My day is perfect. :D

THIS WAS WRITTEN WITH CAPSLOCK ENTHUSIASM, BY THE WAY.

blue_druid November 27 2009, 09:14:29 UTC

I FORGOT to CAPSLOCK my ENTHUSIASM!! and I'm so starting to enjoy using it. Although people keep asking why I'm screaming at them. ;)

NONETHELESS, I WILL CONTINUE TO BE ENTHUSIASTIC ABOUT YOUR FIC!

eumelkeks November 27 2009, 09:16:32 UTC

THAT WILL CONTINUE TO BE VERY SWEET OF YOU UNTIL I FIND OUT WHAT YOUR DEVIOUS PLAN IS!

AND IT'S ONLY PEOPLE WHO ARE NOT HIP TO OUR JIVES!

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